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  1. Posted: November 2, 2016In: Thriller

    When a simulation algorithm predicts that in order to prevent a deadly attack his daughter must die, an assassin must betray his employers to save her.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 2, 2016 at 8:31 pm

    I think you might want to add a job description in the logline for the daughter. And while he wants to save his daughter, does he want to do something else? Does he want to destroy the software? Expose his employers as criminals or something? Because if he doesn't what stops them from coming after hRead more

    I think you might want to add a job description in the logline for the daughter. And while he wants to save his daughter, does he want to do something else? Does he want to destroy the software? Expose his employers as criminals or something? Because if he doesn’t what stops them from coming after her again?

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  2. Posted: November 2, 2016In: Thriller

    When a simulation algorithm predicts that in order to prevent a deadly attack his daughter must die, an assassin must betray his employers to save her.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 2, 2016 at 11:16 am

    "When protection software determines his daughter must die to prevent a deadly attack, an assassin betrays his employers to save her no matter the cost." By protection software do you mean surveillance/ threat assessment(Bringing to mind The Winter Soldier movie and the security vs freedom debate).Read more

    “When protection software determines his daughter must die to prevent a deadly attack, an assassin betrays his employers to save her no matter the cost.”

    By protection software do you mean surveillance/ threat assessment(Bringing to mind The Winter Soldier movie and the security vs freedom debate). And what exactly does he do to betray them? Sabotage the software? Kill someone? Why must his daughter die? How old is she, does her job have something to do with it?
    Otherwise it seems pretty good, just be more specific.

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  3. Posted: October 28, 2016In: Examples

    A team of young superheroes carry out covert missions to prove that they are worthy to join the Justice League.

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    Added an answer on October 28, 2016 at 12:31 pm

    This post isn't really about the logline, which is a description of a plotline that drives the entire series. It is more of a recommendation. Young Justice was an animated DC Comics television show that ran on Cartoon Network from 2010 -13. The show was critically acclaimed but because of low toy saRead more

    This post isn’t really about the logline, which is a description of a plotline that drives the entire series. It is more of a recommendation. Young Justice was an animated DC Comics television show that ran on Cartoon Network from 2010 -13. The show was critically acclaimed but because of low toy sales CN cancelled it. But the creators of the show are still trying to get it another season, taking to Twitter to urge fans to binge on Netflix.
    The show is great, and though it’s been quite a while since I’ve watched it, I recommend it wholeheartedly. The animation is great, the show is suitable for mature and young audiences, and has great diversity. If I remember correctly I personally liked the second(last) season better, but maybe a re watch would yield different results.
    The show is great and if you wish to support it binge it on Netflix, buy it on Itunes, or the comics that are set in the same continuity as the show.

    A quick summary: The show follows teenage heroes that are a covert team for the Justice League. These heroes include well known sidekicks such as Robin and Kid Flash and other more obscure characters.
    The show has serialized stories(I can’t remember if it has a procedural element). It has mature themes, great action, character development and while it is mature it does have humor. And for DC fans who have missed it has a lot of references and includes many obscure DC elements.
    It is a great show and I hope it sees another season.

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