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  1. Posted: June 22, 2026In: Drama

    After an accident cripples the woman he loves, a guilt-ridden young man takes on America’s scars as his own, risking everything to change the course of history and earn the love she freely gives.

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    Added an answer on June 22, 2026 at 9:52 pm

    >>>risking everything to change the course of history What does "change the course" of history *look* like on a movie screen? IOW: what is the specific, concrete, objective goal he wants to accomplish?

    >>>risking everything to change the course of history

    What does “change the course” of history *look* like on a movie screen? IOW: what is the specific, concrete, objective goal he wants to accomplish?

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  2. Posted: June 18, 2026In: Drama

    Convinced that he murdered a priest he caught abusing a child, Henry fractured into two warring personalities, until the insights of his illness help him bring down a dangerous child-trafficking network.

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    Added an answer on June 21, 2026 at 12:44 am

    The unique selling point in this logline is that the protagonist has dual and dueling personalities. But it's not clear to me how the duel complicates the effort to achieve the objective goal. Is one personality opposing and subverting the efforts of the other to bring down the child-trafficking netRead more

    The unique selling point in this logline is that the protagonist has dual and dueling personalities.

    But it’s not clear to me how the duel complicates the effort to achieve the objective goal. Is one personality opposing and subverting the efforts of the other to bring down the child-trafficking network? Or..?

    Also, the objective goal should be the focus of the logline, not the backstory, not subjective issues. Subjective issues and/or backstory should serve the primary objective goal.

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  3. Posted: June 20, 2026In: SciFi

    1880s London: As an American assassin struggles with her dead father’s vengeful spirit, a mysterious cult attempts to brainwash her into killing Queen Victoria.

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    Added an answer on June 20, 2026 at 11:02 pm

    In 1880's London, a mentally tormented American woman, brainwashed by a mysterious cult, plots to kill Queen Victoria. (18 words) The cult has to succeed in brainwashing her. At least temporarily to motivate the plot. I don't understand why this would be categorized as SciFi flick. What's the sciencRead more

    In 1880’s London, a mentally tormented American woman, brainwashed by a mysterious cult, plots to kill Queen Victoria.

    (18 words)

    The cult has to succeed in brainwashing her. At least temporarily to motivate the plot.

    I don’t understand why this would be categorized as SciFi flick. What’s the science entailed in the premise?

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