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[EDIT] A sheltered American teen, kidnapped by a Bangkok crime lord, is groomed first as his protégé, then as his bride — but when she discovers he was her late mother’s secret lover, she uses his methods to destroy him and seize his empire.
For your consideration: When an American teenager is kidnapped by a Bangkok crime lord, she learns to use his methods to destroy him and seize his empire. (24 words) That, imho, is the essence of the plot. A logline is a statement of the plot stripped down to the essential elements. The rest is embeRead more
For your consideration:
When an American teenager is kidnapped by a Bangkok crime lord, she learns to use his methods to destroy him and seize his empire.
(24 words)
That, imho, is the essence of the plot. A logline is a statement of the plot stripped down to the essential elements. The rest is embellishment. Save the embellishment for the elevator pitch.
fwiw
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