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Dr Goodman struggles with an ethical dilemma to misdiagnose a patient’s husband, because he’s falling for his wife.
A doctor deliberately misdiagnoses a man's illness to guarantee his death after falling in love with the man's wife. (19 words) (With the exception of historical dramas, the general rule is to not tag a protagonist with a specific name. Rather identify him by his role in the plot.)
A doctor deliberately misdiagnoses a man’s illness to guarantee his death after falling in love with the man’s wife. (19 words)
(With the exception of historical dramas, the general rule is to not tag a protagonist with a specific name. Rather identify him by his role in the plot.)
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A logline is a *short* statement about the plot. That is, a character's struggle to acheive *specific*, *concrete* goal. This logline hints action having to do with fulfilling a promise -- but we haven't a clue what the promise is. We don't know what *specifically* is her objective goal. And not knoRead more
A logline is a *short* statement about the plot. That is, a character’s struggle to acheive *specific*, *concrete* goal. This logline hints action having to do with fulfilling a promise — but we haven’t a clue what the promise is. We don’t know what *specifically* is her objective goal. And not knowing what the goal is we don’t know whether it might be worth a producer’s time to read the script, worth a director’s time to make the movie, worth an audience’s time to watch it.
Be specific.
>>almost costs her her lifelong dream of getting married and having a family of her own.
This seems to give away the ending, something a logline should never do.
Finally, the logline is 52 words long. Ideally, a logline should come in under 25 words in length.
For loglines, less is more.
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What are the stakes? What is to be gained by solving the mystery? What is to be lost by failing to solve the mystery? Why should a viewer be curious and care about the outcome of the 'fateful journey'?
What are the stakes? What is to be gained by solving the mystery? What is to be lost by failing to solve the mystery? Why should a viewer be curious and care about the outcome of the ‘fateful journey’?
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