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When a man gets accused of sexually abusing a kid, he must face the judgement of his own town, friends and family.
Is this based on a movie? "Must face the judgement..." renders the protagonist passive. The protagonist should be *pro*active and striving toward a specific objective goal. In the face of the criticism and ostracism of his family, friends, and community, what is that objective goal?
Is this based on a movie?
“Must face the judgement…” renders the protagonist passive. The protagonist should be *pro*active and striving toward a specific objective goal. In the face of the criticism and ostracism of his family, friends, and community, what is that objective goal?
See lessOn a normal day, a couple from university arrive in the NY city with same plan for one weekend, but a series of unexpected events happens to them after which their relationship, dreams and views on what they want change throughout a rainy day in a big city.
Needs more specificity, a specific conflict, a specific objective goal. concrete stakes worth the audience's time (and money) worrying about.
Needs more specificity, a specific conflict, a specific objective goal. concrete stakes worth the audience’s time (and money) worrying about.
See lessA “guinea pig” A US Infantry division, formed immediately after Pearl Harbor and populated with middle-aged draftees, becomes the most respected, effective and feared unit in the Pacific Theater, earning the nickname “The Old Bastards”.
If it's based on real historical events, that element needs to be incorporated into the logline; to wit, this is story is based upon strange but true events.
If it’s based on real historical events, that element needs to be incorporated into the logline; to wit, this is story is based upon strange but true events.
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