1. Posted: December 23, 2016In:

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    As noted, a logline is sales tool; it's a short pitch of a script to movie makers. ?What movie makers want want to know about script before they will take the time to read it is: ?Who is the protagonist? What is the incident incident? What is the protagonist's ?specific objective goal? In 40 words oRead more

    As noted, a logline is sales tool; it’s a short pitch of a script to movie makers. ?What movie makers want want to know about script before they will take the time to read it is: ?Who is the protagonist? What is the incident incident? What is the protagonist’s ?specific objective goal?

    In 40 words or less. ?And with the dramatic question stated implicitly not explicitly.

    So ?how does translate “Humanities need for the world communities to come together and establish the international ,social/technological, legal framework that will sustain ubiquitous digital connectivity implemented by the 4th industrial revolution and beyond” ?translate into a specific?objective goal?

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  2. Posted: December 1, 2016In:

    After his wife gives birth to a stillborn, a wizard has three days to enlist the help of the state?s only necromancer to resurrect his daughter and break a generational curse that will kill all the female children born into the family.

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    Definitely an improvement. ?But why doesn't the wizzard have the wizzardy-ways to do it himself? ?And does it have to be a guy? ?Wouldn't the mother be as a strongly motivated to ask for help?And who is the protagonist anyway, the character asking for help or the character giving it?

    Definitely an improvement. ?But why doesn’t the wizzard have the wizzardy-ways to do it himself? ?And does it have to be a guy? ?Wouldn’t the mother be as a strongly motivated to ask for help?

    And who is the protagonist anyway, the character asking for help or the character giving it?

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  3. Posted: November 26, 2016In:

    When he discovers the CIA are controlling the public through the media, a sensationalist conspiracy vlogger must decipher their hidden messages to stop their nefarious plans.

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    >>>to stop their nefarious plans. What are their nefarious plans? So he deciphers the messages? ?What then? ?End of film, FADE OUT to CREDIT SCROLL? ?IOW: What must he do with that information? (And how can he know there's a conspiracy before he's able to decipher the messages?)

    >>>to stop their nefarious plans.

    What are their nefarious plans?

    So he deciphers the messages? ?What then? ?End of film, FADE OUT to CREDIT SCROLL? ?IOW: What must he do with that information?

    (And how can he know there’s a conspiracy before he’s able to decipher the messages?)

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