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When an orphan turned assassin in training disobeys killing her target, she is thrown into the lower ranks of the Assassin’s Guild, working as a servant, trying to work her way up only to discover her parents? killer walking the hallways and finding a record that showed her village?s demise was paid-for, not random and now she must find out the reason why her village was a target, and more importantly, who was responsible for it.
At 76 words, this logline is too long and complicated to properly evaluate and offer suggestions. ?Except to point out that most of it seems to be backstory and the setup for the action of the plot proper. ?I'm ?not sure where the plot proper begins. ?And a logline should focus on the plot proper.PlRead more
At 76 words, this logline is too long and complicated to properly evaluate and offer suggestions. ?Except to point out that most of it seems to be backstory and the setup for the action of the plot proper. ?I’m ?not sure where the plot proper begins. ?And a logline should focus on the plot proper.
Please check out “Training” at the top of the web page for guidelines on composing a succinct, industry acceptable logline.
See lessI did jot know where to post this question so I wrote it here. My question was: Is writing a logline same for a short film, feature film and Documentary. Very rudimentary question but I was curious.
Perhaps, but I don't think it is required or even possible in many cases. ?Whereas loglines are (now) expected in every case for original spec scripts.The purpose of a logline is to sell a script. ?I know we use them here to pitch ideas for scripts, send up trial ballons -- and that's another valuabRead more
Perhaps, but I don’t think it is required or even possible in many cases. ?Whereas loglines are (now) expected in every case for original spec scripts.
The purpose of a logline is to sell a script. ?I know we use them here to pitch ideas for scripts, send up trial ballons — and that’s another valuable opportunity the site provides. (A shout out to Karel!) ?But it was originally designed as a promotional tool, to entice producers and directors to read a finished script.
Now, I realize ?that for historical documentaries, ?a script may be written before any video is shot. ?I’ve amassed a pile of documentation for an historical drama set between 1908 and 1920. ? Enough enough to do a documentary. ?And in both cases, I would use the same logline. Because the story is done and finished — I know how it ends. ?It’s ?essentially the same “plot”.?
But in documentaries for a current ongoing events, you don’t know how it’s going to end. ?You may not even have identified a protagonist, a ?person around whom you will frame a narrative.
A logline is a concise description of a plot. ? And the formal definition of a plot, per Aristotle in the “Poetics”, is an imitation of action, ?a mimicry of real life. ? Which he differentiated from ?histories — the “written documentaries” of his day. ? ?Aristotle said dramatic stories need a plot to succeed whereas histories don’t.?
?Although documentaries must, of necessity, edit reality, they are supposed ?to make a good faith effort to ?conform to known?facts. ?Plot is under no such obligation; it’s has the freedom to bend, wantonly ignore the facts, or make up fictions to fit it’s dramatic purpose.?
Shakespeare’s “Richard III” is a fabulous — and fabulist –historical drama. ?It distorts events and warps characters for the purpose of its plot. ?A documentary of Richard III, faithful to the known historical facts, ?would present a different story, a different portrait.
See lessI did jot know where to post this question so I wrote it here. My question was: Is writing a logline same for a short film, feature film and Documentary. Very rudimentary question but I was curious.
Very good question. ?And I beg to differ somewhat from Moses99. The short answer is that the same logline format for a feature film usually applies for short films , as well as TV or SM (streaming media) series. ?In the case of a series, the logline usually focuses on the plot of the pilot episode tRead more
Very good question. ?And I beg to differ somewhat from Moses99.
The short answer is that the same logline format for a feature film usually applies for short films , as well as TV or SM (streaming media) series. ?In the case of a series, the logline usually focuses on the plot of the pilot episode that launches the series.
The purpose of a ?logline is to promote a?script?for a work of fiction? Documentaries, non-fictional stories, ?are a different species. ?AFAIK, they are pitched in terms of the subject matter, not a script because there is no script. ?(Although there may be an outline.) ?A documentary story is fully discovered and composed as the video is shot and edited.
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