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a broke man falls back to his “college dream band” only to realize his record producer is the mafia he is running from
If the? protagonist realizes his producer is his mafia/load shark nemesis, how come the nemesis doesn't realize who the protagonist is, a victim who owes him money? And what what MUST he do (objective goal) when he discovers the producer's ID?? Or ELSE -- what are the stakes if he fails? (His life,Read more
If the? protagonist realizes his producer is his mafia/load shark nemesis, how come the nemesis doesn’t realize who the protagonist is, a victim who owes him money?
And what what MUST he do (objective goal) when he discovers the producer’s ID?? Or ELSE — what are the stakes if he fails? (His life, no less I should think.)
See lessAfter his father’s second marriage, a teenage boy learns to navigate his new life, only to discover his stepmom’s a narcissist..
I would like to follow up my previous post. I think the concept of a narcissistic step-mother would provide the raw ore for a comedy, more so than for a drama.? But the ore needs refining.??A logline describes a? plot.? And a plot is? a story framed from the point of view of the protagonist.? In thiRead more
I would like to follow up my previous post. I think the concept of a narcissistic step-mother would provide the raw ore for a comedy, more so than for a drama.? But the ore needs refining.?
?A logline describes a? plot.? And a plot is? a story framed from the point of view of the protagonist.? In this case, that’s the boy.? So? what is the specific complication that an “all about me” step mom creates in a story that is nominally “all about him”.? What Big Dream of his is threatened by her personality disorder?
See lessWhen a grieving widow learns her husband took a bullet intended for her, she must survive long enough to discover who wants her dead.
After her husband takes a bullet intended for her, the grieving widow fights to discover who wanted her dead --and why. (20 words)That's the nut of the premise as I see it.? But I'm puzzled by the phrase "survive long enough".? What does that mean?? Is she old and infirm?? Is there a ticking clock iRead more
After her husband takes a bullet intended for her, the grieving widow fights to discover who wanted her dead –and why.
(20 words)
That’s the nut of the premise as I see it.? But I’m puzzled by the phrase “survive long enough”.? What does that mean?? Is she old and infirm?? Is there a ticking clock in the form of a fatal disease she is afflicted with?? Are they still trying to kill her?? ?I would like a clarification on that point.
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