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  1. Posted: January 2, 2018In: Horror

    “The Wedding Killer” In small town of Delaware The young police officer investigating , a case of murder in brides one day before their wedding day

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 11:22 pm

    I think it's an interesting situation? for a whodunnit.But the logline needs to be formulated in terms of a plot.? It is not sufficient to just throw down the initial situation.?So what is the plot? (For example, could he be engaged to be married which would raise the personal stakes and urgency forRead more

    I think it’s an interesting situation? for a whodunnit.

    But the logline needs to be formulated in terms of a plot.? It is not sufficient to just throw down the initial situation.?

    So what is the plot? (For example, could he be engaged to be married which would raise the personal stakes and urgency for him to solve the case as his wedding day approaches?)

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  2. Posted: December 31, 2017In: Fantasy

    possible fiction-thriller “the quarry” (MITH)

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    Added an answer on January 2, 2018 at 2:21 am

    >>>3) the Sin: __________(that?s where I am confused)Implicit in Blake Snyder's description of the MITH trope is the notion that the monster fulfills the classic role of Nemesis, the retributive, pay back character/force/entity? for some original sin by the protagonist and/or? group to whicRead more

    >>>3) the Sin: __________(that?s where I am confused)

    Implicit in Blake Snyder’s description of the MITH trope is the notion that the monster fulfills the classic role of Nemesis, the retributive, pay back character/force/entity? for some original sin by the protagonist and/or? group to which he? is associated.? IOW, the manifestation of the? MITH in the plot is causal, not coincidental.? The cause lies in the backstory which the protagonist must eventually discover and deal with in order to defeat the MITH.

    Take the case of two of the very best MITH films: “Alien” and “Aliens”.? In both cases, the original sin is the Big Bad Corporation ‘s profit motive.? The willingness to intentionally put the lives of the protagonist (and crew) in jeopardy in order to? cash in on the Alien’s military potential, it’s unique offensive and defensive attributes.

    And in both movies, that’s the Big Discovery for Ripley, the moment when she realizes she’s being “fucked over for a goddamm percentage” of the profits.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: December 20, 2017In: Comedy

    ?tittle:______ ? ? ? ?”The black?chines s” The black america rapper and ?university?student ?went?to ?china rural area with his?chines?girl?friend?and class mate ?in summer?break?straggle?to?adapt?culture and discept with her family and community and her?chine’s?ex boy?friend

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    Added an answer on January 1, 2018 at 6:51 am

    The logline sets up a very interesting situation for cultural and ethnic conflict.? But then what happens?? What is the plot that follows from the conflict.? As a result of the conflict, what must the Black rapper do?? What becomes his objective goal? (Why is he there to begin with?? Does he intendRead more

    The logline sets up a very interesting situation for cultural and ethnic conflict.? But then what happens?? What is the plot that follows from the conflict.? As a result of the conflict, what must the Black rapper do?? What becomes his objective goal? (Why is he there to begin with?? Does he intend to marry the girl?)

    What’s at stake? He’s only going to be there for a while,? right?? ?So as soon as he goes back to school, his dramatic problem is solved — or is it?

    fwiw

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