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  1. Posted: December 26, 2017In: Crime

    pls comment on it

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 1, 2018 at 1:28 am

    An audience may sympathize with the teacher's dramatic problem, but I doubt they will sympathize with his solution, kidnapping an innocent person for ransom, victimizing one of his own students. So the protagonist is, in effect, an anti-hero.? Anti-hero stories are? difficult to pull off.? Vince GilRead more

    An audience may sympathize with the teacher’s dramatic problem, but I doubt they will sympathize with his solution, kidnapping an innocent person for ransom, victimizing one of his own students.

    So the protagonist is, in effect, an anti-hero.? Anti-hero stories are? difficult to pull off.? Vince Gilligan did it quite effectively in? “Breaking Bad”.? I would suggest studying that series, particularly the pilot episode, for how he pulled it off.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: December 29, 2017In: Drama

    possible rites of passage “the masterpiece”

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    Added an answer on January 1, 2018 at 12:36 am

    I concur with Nir Shelter on the issue of significant stakes that would emotionally invest an audience in the outcome.Also: >>>this is a Hollywood insider story and most producers hate/avoid reading these kinds of scripts.Particularly from outsiders.? It takes an insider to know what it's lRead more

    I concur with Nir Shelter on the issue of significant stakes that would emotionally invest an audience in the outcome.

    Also:
    >>>this is a Hollywood insider story and most producers hate/avoid reading these kinds of scripts.

    Particularly from outsiders.? It takes an insider to know what it’s like to be an insider.

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  3. Posted: December 31, 2017In: SciFi

    possible sci-fi thriller “the ghost of past and future”

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 1, 2018 at 12:23 am

    >>>?managing the linearity of his continuum Huh?? What does that mean? Film is a visual medium.? Therefore, it's imperative that a logline? should describe a plot that can be visualized in the mind's eye of the reader.? Even if only as a sketch. I, for one, am unable to form even a sketchyRead more

    >>>?managing the linearity of his continuum

    Huh?? What does that mean?

    Film is a visual medium.? Therefore, it’s imperative that a logline? should describe a plot that can be visualized in the mind’s eye of the reader.? Even if only as a sketch.

    I, for one, am unable to form even a sketchy visual for? “managing the linearity of his continuum”.

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