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possible rites of passage “the masterpiece”
>>>would be him making his film regardless Then something like that (more clearly defined) should be in the logline. However, >>>discovering the painful truth, that he lived a life full of lies.. should not be in the logline. Because : 1] It's a spoiler, giving away a critical beatRead more
>>>would be him making his film regardless
Then something like that (more clearly defined) should be in the logline.
However,
>>>discovering the painful truth, that he lived a life full of lies..
should not be in the logline. Because : 1] It’s a spoiler, giving away a critical beat of how the story ends. 2] Loglines are about what a protagonist intentionally sets out to do, not what he unintentionally discovers.? And 3] the come-to-realize/discovery pertains to a subjective issue. Although subjective issues are entailed in the pursuit of an objective goal, loglines focus on? objective issues, not subjective ones.
fwiw
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The logline sets up a situation with lots of possibilities for conflict.? However, declaring a rupture in the relationship is not enough to round out a logline.? A logline needs to state a course dramatic action that results from the rupture.What becomes the protagonist's objective goal -- his act oRead more
The logline sets up a situation with lots of possibilities for conflict.? However, declaring a rupture in the relationship is not enough to round out a logline.? A logline needs to state a course dramatic action that results from the rupture.
What becomes the protagonist’s objective goal — his act of revenge or spite (I presume)?
And is there a sole protagonist or is this the story of “dueling” dual protagonists?
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It' s an interesting idea, but as Richiev notes,? it needs a clear conflict.? What dramatic problem is created by this situation?? What conflict, what struggle ensues as a result of the relationship? And as Brandon8719 asked, what is the hook that differentiates this from the "Twilight" series withRead more
It’ s an interesting idea, but as Richiev notes,? it needs a clear conflict.? What dramatic problem is created by this situation?? What conflict, what struggle ensues as a result of the relationship?
And as Brandon8719 asked, what is the hook that differentiates this from the “Twilight” series with which it will be immediately compared?
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