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A woman wakes from an experiment she can?t remember signing up for, and is told she can leave as soon as the rest of her memories return. But when the other patients start disappearing without a trace, she begins to doubt whether the memory existed in the first place.
As FFF said.The logline ?has dramatic potential, it sets up an interesting situation, but unfortunately ?it wants for dramatic narrative. ?The inciting incident seems to be the disappearance of other patients. ?And an inciting incident should incite -- trigger -- action, cause a character to do someRead more
As FFF said.
The logline ?has dramatic potential, it sets up an interesting situation, but unfortunately ?it wants for dramatic narrative. ?The inciting incident seems to be the disappearance of other patients. ?And an inciting incident should incite — trigger — action, cause a character to do something. ?But in this logline the character seems to just ?sit there. ?She doubts — but doesn’t act on her doubts. ?What must she do about her doubts? ?And what’s at stake? ?What does she stand to gain or lose?
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1] If he's a fictional character, he need not be named in a logline. ?More important than his name is the designation of a flaw. 2] What, exactly, is the professor's objective goal? What plot arises out of his "inspiration"? 3] Who/what opposes his effort? 4] What's at stake? ?(The so-what factor.)Read more
1] If he’s a fictional character, he need not be named in a logline. ?More important than his name is the designation of a flaw.
See less2] What, exactly, is the professor’s objective goal? What plot arises out of his “inspiration”?
3] Who/what opposes his effort?
4] What’s at stake? ?(The so-what factor.) ?What is to be gained if he succeeds? ?What will he lose if he fails?
Childhood friends William and Tucker think they’ve both been hired at a Chicago lifestyle magazine, when only one job materializes and is given to William, rather than tell the truth, William signs his friend up to participate in a social experiment pretending it’s an undercover story for the magazine.
At 86 words, the logline is way too long and way too complicated to evaluate. ?Please read the guidelines for an industry standard logline under "Training" at the top of the web page and condense and simplify accordingly.
At 86 words, the logline is way too long and way too complicated to evaluate. ?Please read the guidelines for an industry standard logline under “Training” at the top of the web page and condense and simplify accordingly.
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