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  1. Posted: June 1, 2016In: War

    A mute street performer with PTSD, trapped and on the run in war-torn Europe, must use his wits and talents, and enlist the help of the French Resistance, to change the course of the second World War.

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    Added an answer on June 2, 2016 at 12:57 am

    >>>to change the course of the second World War.I agree with Richiev that this ought to be dropped. ?Unless, the character has a very specific objective goal, a very specific -- and unique -- plan ?for changing the course of the war. ?Like Alan Turing did in "The Imitation Game". ?His veryRead more

    >>>to change the course of the second World War.

    I agree with Richiev that this ought to be dropped. ?Unless, the character has a very specific objective goal, a very specific — and unique — plan ?for changing the course of the war. ?Like Alan Turing did in “The Imitation Game”. ?His very specific objective goal was to crack the Nazi Enigma code. ?And his very specific — and unique plan — for achieving that goal was to build a calculating machine, a primitive computer.

    And the bonus feature of that film?is that it was based on a ?real character, real history, the work of the British code crackers at Blenchley Park. ?Is this story based on a real character, on a real episode in World War II?

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  2. Posted: June 2, 2016In: Drama

    When a college student falls in love with wakeboarding while preparing to win the Women?s World Amateur Golf Tournament, she must decide whether to pursue a future of money and stability, or passion and uncertainty.

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    Added an answer on June 2, 2016 at 12:46 am

    Loglines are about plots. ? And plots are not about a character deciding to decide, refusing to decide, hesitating to decide. Plots are about the decision the character actually makes, the objective goal she commits to, the action that follows. So what does the character decide to do? ?What becomesRead more

    Loglines are about plots. ? And plots are not about a character deciding to decide, refusing to decide, hesitating to decide. Plots are about the decision the character actually makes, the objective goal she commits to, the action that follows.

    So what does the character decide to do? ?What becomes her objective goal? ?Who opposes her objective goal?

    And what is at stake that an audience should care whether she succeeds or fails?

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  3. Posted: June 1, 2016In: Thriller

    A man seeking love falls for a lady he will marry. When he walks in on his best friend sleeping with her, he then must make a choice to either walk away or get his revenge.

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    Added an answer on June 2, 2016 at 12:39 am

    As Nir Shelter said. ?Loglines are about the plot and the plot is about the action that follows from the decision the protagonist makes, not about the protagonist deciding to decide. So what does the protagonist decide to do? ?What is the plot? ?What becomes the protagonist's objective goal as a resRead more

    As Nir Shelter said. ?Loglines are about the plot and the plot is about the action that follows from the decision the protagonist makes, not about the protagonist deciding to decide.

    So what does the protagonist decide to do? ?What is the plot? ?What becomes the protagonist’s objective goal as a result of discovering the infidelity?

    (And if revenge, why only on his best friend? ?What about her? ?It takes 2 to tango.)

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