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A time-traveling hitman wakes up in his next hit anytime he sleeps. When he learns of a remedy that cures fatigue, he betrays the mob in search of their mad-scientist’s invention.
I ?agree with FFF that while the time traveling hit man has been done, time traveling remains a rich vein for drama.For me, the hook in this logline is that his time traveling is triggered by sleeping; he falls asleep in one "time zone", wakes up in "another". ?I'm intrigued by the set up -- but notRead more
I ?agree with FFF that while the time traveling hit man has been done, time traveling remains a rich vein for drama.
For me, the hook in this logline is that his time traveling is triggered by sleeping; he falls asleep in one “time zone”, wakes up in “another”. ?I’m intrigued by the set up — but not by the plot that follows or, at least, not as the dramatic problem is framed.
I hope you will continue to develop and polish the concept..
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And what woman isn't looking for "Mr. Right"? ?And who doesn't have reservations about commitment? ?Other than she's using the company dating app, I don't see what differentiates this from other romantic comedies about a woman looking for love in all the wrong places, among all the wrong men.
And what woman isn’t looking for “Mr. Right”? ?And who doesn’t have reservations about commitment? ?Other than she’s using the company dating app, I don’t see what differentiates this from other romantic comedies about a woman looking for love in all the wrong places, among all the wrong men.
See lessA paranormal reporter hears rumours that some ghostly activity is happening at her former school. Being a skeptic, she heads out to defraud the rumours, only to discover that there is something eery happening everywhere in the school… except for the Janitor’s Room..
Alas, this is another incomplete logline. ?It is incomplete because it sets up a situation and an inciting incident in the form of a discovery, but it fails to follow through to completion with an objective goal -- what the protagonist must do as a result of her discovery.A logline is not the same aRead more
Alas, this is another incomplete logline. ?It is incomplete because it sets up a situation and an inciting incident in the form of a discovery, but it fails to follow through to completion with an objective goal — what the protagonist must do as a result of her discovery.
A logline is not the same as s movie blurb or teaser where you leave the reader dangling without any clear cut idea of where the story is going. ?A logline targets a different audience, movie makers rather than movie viewers.
The purpose of a blurb is to persuade movie viewers to invest $12-15 and 2 hours of their lives in your story. ?The purpose of a logline is to persuade movie makers to invest millions and 2 or more years of their lives in your story– they have more at stake and want to know more about specific elements: ?a clearly defined protagonist (with a flaw), a clearly defined objective goal, a clearly defined antagonist or obstacle, and serious stakes.
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