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An angel is brutalized by the police, and now his daughter, and humanity must fight him in order to survive.
The premise strains credibility. No matter what the disguise, angels are supposed to be the "good guys". ? Yet this one is acting like a demon. ?WTF?
The premise strains credibility. No matter what the disguise, angels are supposed to be the “good guys”. ? Yet this one is acting like a demon. ?WTF?
See lessAfter his friends are arrested for robbing the convenience store he works at as an inside job, he must rob his own workplace in order to bail them out before they rat on him.
Yep, why should the audience care about him? ?He starts off as a loser and by robbing his own work place becomes an even greater loser.
Yep, why should the audience care about him? ?He starts off as a loser and by robbing his own work place becomes an even greater loser.
See lessWhen a teenager and his best friend get his father fired they must help him find a job even though he has 2 skills (watching tv and eating)
Although his friend is a co-conspirator in the story, for the sake of brevity and clarity, I don't think he needs to be mentioned in the logline. ?Rather, focus on the one who is the prime "suspect", the protagonist, the son ?because he is the one more responsible for getting his father fired, and cRead more
Although his friend is a co-conspirator in the story, for the sake of brevity and clarity, I don’t think he needs to be mentioned in the logline. ?Rather, focus on the one who is the prime “suspect”, the protagonist, the son ?because he is the one more responsible for getting his father fired, and consequently the one with more at stake.
I would like to see a clearer statement of the inciting incident. ?What did the son do that got his father fired?
And if the father is so untalented, ?how did he ever get the job in the first place? ?Why wasn’t he fired on his own “merits”? ?Why did he need “help” from his son to lose his job?
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