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A father seeks revenge on the internet troll who might have been responsible for his teenage son’s suicide.
The story is certainly topical. ?The protagonist has a clear motivation. ?And the challenge is difficult enough to create dramatic suspense: ?how do you ID the troll (who operate under AKA's), let alone locate and confront him face to face?What isn't so clear is how he intends to get revenge. ?Sue hRead more
The story is certainly topical. ?The protagonist has a clear motivation. ?And the challenge is difficult enough to create dramatic suspense: ?how do you ID the troll (who operate under AKA’s), let alone locate and confront him face to face?
What isn’t so clear is how he intends to get revenge. ?Sue him? ?Press criminal charges? ?Or…??IOW: the father’s general objective goal is obvious, but revenge can take so many forms. ?So I think in this instance the logline would benefit by hinting at the form of revenge he seeks to mete out on the troll.
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I think there is a potentially interesting story to tell here, but I'm not sure what the point is of this one -- the theme. What idea does the writer wish to explore? ?Theme is external to the content of a logline -- but it implicitly shapes it as it is an integral part of the story proper, or oughtRead more
I think there is a potentially interesting story to tell here, but I’m not sure what the point is of this one — the theme. What idea does the writer wish to explore? ?Theme is external to the content of a logline — but it implicitly shapes it as it is an integral part of the story proper, or ought to be. ?What is the point of this concept other than to use the father as a comic foil, to play him for a fool?
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As ?noted by Richiev, it?reads too much like a knockoff of the "Thor" brand/franchise. ? I'm all for more super-hero movies with female leads, but ?other than the fact that the principals are women, ?what makes it ?a fresh, unique story, different from "Thor"?
As ?noted by Richiev, it?reads too much like a knockoff of the “Thor” brand/franchise. ? I’m all for more super-hero movies with female leads, but ?other than the fact that the principals are women, ?what makes it ?a fresh, unique story, different from “Thor”?
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