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  1. Posted: May 14, 2016In: Examples

    After her arranged husband separates her from her piano, a mute pianist must earn her piano back one key at a time by giving lessons to the man who bought it and who secretly loves her.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 14, 2016 at 9:46 pm

    My take:When her new husband trades away her beloved piano for land, a mute pianist must earn it back one key at a time by giving lessons to the new owner who secretly loves her. (34) wordsI inserted "beloved" to highlight the intensity of her emotional attachment to the piano, ?her desperate need tRead more

    My take:

    When her new husband trades away her beloved piano for land, a mute pianist must earn it back one key at a time by giving lessons to the new owner who secretly loves her.
    (34) words

    I inserted “beloved” to highlight the intensity of her emotional attachment to the piano, ?her desperate need to get it back.

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  2. Posted: May 11, 2016In: SciFi

    When a tech company?s financial software is compromised by a terrorist group, a strategist must unravel clues from an ancient work of popular Japanese fiction to prevent the global economy from collapse.

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    Added an answer on May 14, 2016 at 8:14 am

    My principal issue with the logline is that the facts of actual cybertheft eclipse the fiction of this concept in terms of audacity, scale and risk.For example, the current revelations of the hacking of Swift (Society for Worldwide Interbank Financial Telecommunication), the backbone messaging systeRead more

    My principal issue with the logline is that the facts of actual cybertheft eclipse the fiction of this concept in terms of audacity, scale and risk.

    For example, the current revelations of the hacking of Swift (Society for Worldwide Interbank Financial Telecommunication), the backbone messaging system used by thousands of banks and companies to move tens of billions of dollars of transactions around the world every year.

    How does this story top that?

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2016In: Thriller

    A writer finds a journal and decides to use its contents for his next novel not knowing it contains hidden plans to murder a future country leader.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 11, 2016 at 7:28 am

    If he doesn't know what the journal is about then there seems to be no plot until he discovers it's true import. ?And then what? ?What is the plot that arises out of this situation? His blithe ignorance or what he does when he realizes the significance of the journal?

    If he doesn’t know what the journal is about then there seems to be no plot until he discovers it’s true import. ?And then what? ?What is the plot that arises out of this situation? His blithe ignorance or what he does when he realizes the significance of the journal?

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