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  1. Posted: January 17, 2020In: Examples

    When a disgraced bodyguard is hired to transport a smarmy hitman to the Hague, the two have one weekend to outsmart, outrun, outgun, or evade, every assassin in Europe, and that’s if the two doesn’t shoot each other first.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 18, 2020 at 7:56 am

    I haven't seen the movie yet, but here's? my take combining what I appeal to me as the sizzle of both versions ("plague of assassins", "outsmart, outrun, outgun")A disgraced bodyguard has 48 hours to transport a smarmy hitman to the Hague to testify against a dictator while outsmarting, outrunning,Read more

    I haven’t seen the movie yet, but here’s? my take combining what I appeal to me as the sizzle of both versions (“plague of assassins”, “outsmart, outrun, outgun”)

    A disgraced bodyguard has 48 hours to transport a smarmy hitman to the Hague to testify against a dictator while outsmarting, outrunning, outgunning a plague of assassins.? And not shoot each other first.

    (33 words)

    I violated the inviolable rule that says a logline? can only be one sentence because the last 5 words constitute the button beat, a punch line so I think it’s justified, think it works.? I mean, if you were delivering this logline in a pitch meeting, you’d pause for second after assassins before delivering the punch line.? Right?

    I dropped evade because I think that is an aspect of “outsmart”.

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: January 15, 2020In: Public

    404 page error – when using the search box and when trying to move past the first page of someone’s loglines. Is it only me?

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    Added an answer on January 15, 2020 at 2:31 am

    It's a long time problem that has been noted but not fixed.Your might want to raise the issue with the site proprietor, Karel Segers (karel@logline.it).?

    It’s a long time problem that has been noted but not fixed.

    Your might want to raise the issue with the site proprietor, Karel Segers (karel@logline.it).

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  3. Posted: January 14, 2020In: Adventure

    A married man begins dating a woman via lucid dream technology, but things get strange when she starts appearing when he?s awake.

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    Added an answer on January 15, 2020 at 1:19 am

    An interesting premise that flips the Freud's concept of "day residue", whereby people, places and events in waking life provide the raw material for the content of dreams. Maybe something like: A faithfully married man's torrid affair with a mysterious woman in his dreams becomes real when she appeRead more

    An interesting premise that flips the Freud’s concept of “day residue”, whereby people, places and events in waking life provide the raw material for the content of dreams.

    Maybe something like:

    A faithfully married man’s torrid affair with a mysterious woman in his dreams becomes real when she appears in his waking life.

    I suggest ramping up the dramatic tension by making him a deeply religious person, perhaps a minister, in his waking life.?? But I would ramp up to the state of lucid dreaming.? And I see no need for some pseudo-magical techno fix as with mindful practice, lucid dreams can be induced naturally.

    fwiw

     

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