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Years after her family is murdered by a vicious career criminal, a lonely young woman embarks on helping two London detectives catch a hooded vigilante, killing the men of the very same man who destroyed her life. But when the hood comes down, will they like what’s revealed?
What kbfilmworks asked. Also, as has been stated with your other loglines, IvyDene91, it's not necessary to end a logline on with a question.? In fact, it works against the function of a logline? The purpose of a?logline are not designed to tease, but to inform.???So it is prudent to stick to a basiRead more
What kbfilmworks asked.
Also, as has been stated with your other loglines, IvyDene91, it’s not necessary to end a logline on with a question.? In fact, it works against the function of a logline? The purpose of a?logline are not designed to tease, but to inform.???So it is prudent to stick to a basic declarative statement (or two) that gives the basic elements:? the protagonist with a flaw, an objective goal, an antagonist or obstacle, and the stakes.
See lessThe hunt for a spy takes a twist when an innocent bystander in a public park is mistaken for a government agent. (short film)
Who would you characterize as the protagonist, the person in the driver's seat of the plot? ?The hunter or the innocent bystander?
Who would you characterize as the protagonist, the person in the driver’s seat of the plot? ?The hunter or the innocent bystander?
See lessAfter discovering his friend has joined the illuminati in order to become a famous rapper, a timid pothead must go undercover as an aspiring actor, in order to infiltrate and disband the secret society, and in doing so learns that in order to defeat the outside forces of the world, he must first defeat his own ego.
And why would the Illuminati want to promote?a ?rapper?? Or admit to its secret councils an aspiring actor??? How did their standards get so low that they would admit characters like these? What's in it for them??? Isn't the organization?supposed to be focused on conspiracies for??world domination,Read more
And why would the Illuminati want to promote?a ?rapper?? Or admit to its secret councils an aspiring actor??? How did their standards get so low that they would admit characters like these? What’s in it for them??? Isn’t the organization?supposed to be focused on conspiracies for??world domination, not entertainment.
Okay, it’s a comedy, and comedies can play loose with fact — and fiction — but still, there has to be some sense of plausibility,?some credible?cause-and-effect.?? Others’ mileage may vary, but I don’t see the point or the connections.
fwiw
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