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  1. Posted: March 2, 2016In: Comedy

    When seven year old Olive needs to get to a far away beauty pageant her family accompanies her on an arduous road trip.

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    Added an answer on March 3, 2016 at 4:33 am

    A father with frustrated dreams takes his dysfunctional family to California in a dysfunctional vehicle to fulfill his daughter's dream of participating in a beauty contest. (26 words) Little Miss Sunshine

    A father with frustrated dreams takes his dysfunctional family to California in a dysfunctional vehicle to fulfill his daughter’s dream of participating in a beauty contest.
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  2. Posted: March 2, 2016In: Drama

    When the girl of his dreams buys him a drink, an agoraphobic movie projectionist must overcome the trauma of the death of his parents in order to take her on a date outside the arthouse cinema that he calls home.

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    Added an answer on March 2, 2016 at 9:58 pm

    The problem I see is that his conflict is not only (mostly) internal but his objective goal, such as it is,? is backward looking, overcoming a past trauma, rather than forward looking.?? What's his dream going forward in his life?? What does he want to accomplish in the future, not merely overcome fRead more

    The problem I see is that his conflict is not only (mostly) internal but his objective goal, such as it is,? is backward looking, overcoming a past trauma, rather than forward looking.?? What’s his dream going forward in his life?? What does he want to accomplish in the future, not merely overcome from the past?

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2016In: Drama

    A father?s poor decision causes a tragic event that haunts his son?s every move, leading him to a life of drugs and solitude.

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    Added an answer on March 2, 2016 at 2:17 pm

    He??wants to fight his addiction? for the sake of his relationship with his dog??? That's it?? That's all he wants to achieve?? That's all the movie would be about?It strikes me as the easier way, a path of lesser resistance and risk.????The harder way would be to risk?a relationship with his fellowRead more

    He??wants to fight his addiction? for the sake of his relationship with his dog??? That’s it?? That’s all he wants to achieve?? That’s all the movie would be about?

    It strikes me as the easier way, a path of lesser resistance and risk.????The harder way would be to risk?a relationship with his fellow homo sapiens.? Like a woman.

    I think that a?story that an audience is more likely? to want to see? would be about a character who takes the biggest risk for his biggest dream.? What’s his biggest dream?

    ?I’m not against dogs, but?I? have no idea what the character wants to, needs to ?accomplish.?

    Isn’t overcoming his addiction enough of a goal?? Well, it’s certainly would be a struggle to stop his drug abuse.

    But that would only eliminate a negative in his life.??But one can’t live life in a vacuum, so what’s the positive replacement?

    ?Consider the movie “Lucy”.? It’s? about a lonely woman down on her luck?who tries desperately to keep her dog while struggling to raise the money to fix her? car so she can get to Alaska where she hopes to? find a job and start over.? She’s struggling to get somewhere and do something besides keep her dog.

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