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When a troubled young man tries to kill himself, confined to the hospital he finds some peace by supporting cancer patients but faces being discharged and losing his newfound peace.
>>>>Could there be something that happens with a cancer patient that brings a new twist to the storyA?great story?twist!? The cancer?patient, terminally? ill, asks the?young man with suicidal tendencies to help her her own life.
>>>>Could there be something that happens with a cancer patient that brings a new twist to the story
A?great story?twist!? The cancer?patient, terminally? ill, asks the?young man with suicidal tendencies to help her her own life.
See lessWhen a rambunctious young clubber wakes up bound and gagged in the trunk of a speeding car she must use her wits and the contents of her handbag to escape her mobile prison before she meets her unknown fate. (Short Film)
Agree with FFF.??Being bound and gagged implies serious jeopardy.? And I think it could be even shorter. When a rambunctious young clubber wakes up bound and gagged in the trunk of a speeding car she must use her wits and the contents of her handbag to escape. (30 words)
Agree with FFF.??Being bound and gagged implies serious jeopardy.? And I think it could be even shorter.
When a rambunctious young clubber wakes up bound and gagged in the trunk of a speeding car she must use her wits and the contents of her handbag to escape.
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When a careless, charismatic small time thief impulsively kills a policeman, he must collect some money owed to him in Paris so he can flee to Italy, while trying to convince his ex-girlfriend to come along – Breathless
When a charming but careless?petty thief impulsively kills a policeman, he must collect?money owed?him to flee?the country. (21 words) That's the "A" story. "Convincing his ex-girlfriend to come along" is the "B" story. Loglines are usually about the "A" story, not the "A" and "B" story.???In this cRead more
When a charming but careless?petty thief impulsively kills a policeman, he must collect?money owed?him to flee?the country.
(21 words)
That’s the “A” story.
“Convincing his ex-girlfriend to come along” is the “B” story.
Loglines are usually about the “A” story, not the “A” and “B” story.???In this case getting the money to flee the country is?the urgent, necessary?action, what?he absolutely must do.? Getting? the girl, his ex,?to?join him is a bonus but not a requirement.
Unless emotionally, he can’t bear to leave the country without her.? Even so,,?emotional complications, subjective needs, relationship issues are the business of the “B” story.? The?business of the “A” story, the focus of the logline, is that he needs to get the money to get out of the country.
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