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A successful man feels he?s got everything, but his life goal is to win the Olympic Games in 2016. He competes in swimming freestyle. He won?t win a single race in first place until he discovers steroids. He embraces the drug and takes the 1st place. But his conscience won?t let him live in peace. After 3 months, he is demanded for having injected the drug in order to win the race.
The logline seems to give away the ending?, something a logline should never do.? And what does "demanded" mean?? Does he lose his victory medal because he got caught in a post-race drug test or because he voluntarily confessed to taking steroids?
The logline seems to give away the ending?, something a logline should never do.? And what does “demanded” mean?? Does he lose his victory medal because he got caught in a post-race drug test or because he voluntarily confessed to taking steroids?
See lessA young, passionate-about-art, ambitious student signs up for an art class in which he paints several masterpieces that reflect his original ideas. He manages to finish one painting a class, but his strict and negative professor breaks his canvases and paints an ?X? on them because he doesn?t think they?re good enough, preventing the artist from unleashing his potential.
The logline sets up a problem, but not a plot.? And it presents the protagonist as a passive victim of others.? Well, a protagonist can start out that way, but during the course of the story he should ?become a proactive agent of his own destiny.?? The switch from being passive to proactive?can be aRead more
The logline sets up a problem, but not a plot.? And it presents the protagonist as a passive victim of others.? Well, a protagonist can start out that way, but during the course of the story he should ?become a proactive agent of his own destiny.?? The switch from being passive to proactive?can be a framework?for?a plot.
So ?what?does?the aspiring artists do –what becomes his objective goal?– as a result of the overly critical teacher?
See lessA guy meets a beautiful woman in Scandinavia, but he can not remember her name. They didn?t exchange numbers. They don?t live in the same country. But they felt extreme chemistry. The are both sure they came to this world to make beautiful babies, but she leaves the place after they meet. Leaving this man with the intrigue, motivating him to search for all the girls from Scandinavia on Facebook until he finds her picture. (The man later discovers he had the woman?s name written on a paper in his the back pocket of the jean he was wearing that day).
The logline is too long and?confusing. And it?gives away the ending -- something a logline should never do. The confusion, in my mind anyway, arises from the fact that they exchanged phone numbers. So why didn't he just call her?? Also a guy is utterly bedazzled and bewitched by a woman -- but can'tRead more
The logline is too long and?confusing. And it?gives away the ending — something a logline should never do.
The confusion, in my mind anyway, arises from the fact that they exchanged phone numbers. So why didn’t he just call her?? Also a guy is utterly bedazzled and bewitched by a woman — but can’t remember her name, not even her 1st name?? How probable, how believable is that?
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