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  1. Posted: October 11, 2015In: Action

    A distrusting psychic interrogator, who steals information by entering a suspect?s mind, becomes infected by a recent suspect’s consciousness and must team up with his inner demons to stop his mind being taking over .

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    Added an answer on October 12, 2015 at 12:57 pm

    When a devious psychic who steals secrets from other people's minds realizes another psychic is trying to steal from his, he must... he must... Well, what must he do?? Repel the intruder, yes.? But what's at stake?? What does he stand to lose if he fails?? What's the big secret at risk?

    When a devious psychic who steals secrets from other people’s minds realizes another psychic is trying to steal from his, he must… he must…

    Well, what must he do?? Repel the intruder, yes.? But what’s at stake?? What does he stand to lose if he fails?? What’s the big secret at risk?

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  2. Posted: October 9, 2015In: Thriller

    A paranoid security consultant is contacted by an unknown woman claiming he?s the target of an organisation that makes assassinations look like accidents, however, as he struggles to discover why he?s been targeted, he?s confronted with conflicting stories of his own actions.

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    Added an answer on October 12, 2015 at 12:45 pm

    When a milquetoast delivery man discovers he's the target of an assassination plot he has 24 hours to discover who is after him, why, and how to stop them.? (29 words) "Milquetoast" rather than "Paranoid" because the latter entails the possibility he could be fantasizing the whole conspiracy.? And iRead more

    When a milquetoast delivery man discovers he’s the target of an assassination plot he has 24 hours to discover who is after him, why, and how to stop them.? (29 words)

    “Milquetoast” rather than “Paranoid” because the latter entails the possibility he could be fantasizing the whole conspiracy.? And if that’s the final reveal — that’s all in his head — well, imho, it’s not nice to fool an audience like that unless you’ve got some really clever way to fool them and make them enjoy being played for dupes.?? And if you do, good luck.

    “Delivery man” rather than “security consultant ” to create more suspense, more mystery — why is?the most innocuous of men, the least likely candidate for an assassination being targeted?

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: October 11, 2015In: SciFi

    When a naive network engineer is suddenly disconnected from global mind-meld he must find a way to reconnect before government operatives hunt him down or sickness due to disconnection kills him.

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    Added an answer on October 12, 2015 at 12:11 pm

    Why would government guys come after him?? Why does disconnecting jeopardize his health?? Is it a crime, is it deviant behavior to become disconnected from the "global meld"?? Why is it bad for one's health? Why doesn't he want?to take advantage of the opportunity and assert his?independence from thRead more

    Why would government guys come after him?? Why does disconnecting jeopardize his health?? Is it a crime, is it deviant behavior to become disconnected from the “global meld”?? Why is it bad for one’s health?

    Why doesn’t he want?to take advantage of the opportunity and assert his?independence from the meld?? Why should the audience want to root for him to re-connect — what kind of hero’s journey is that?

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