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  1. Posted: October 9, 2015In: Comedy

    After trashing his friend’s car while drunk, a 20 year old slacker must share a paper route, the only job he can find, with his overachieving 12 year old sister to pay for the damages and avoid jail time.

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2015 at 1:52 pm

    Well... Under court order to pay reparations for trashing a house while drunk or else?do time, a college dropout must take the only job he can find, as a paper boy working for an overachieving?12- year old girl. (38 words) Whatever, I suggest that man-boy versus girl would create more interesting coRead more

    Well…

    Under court order to pay reparations for trashing a house while drunk or else?do time, a college dropout must take the only job he can find, as a paper boy working for an overachieving?12- year old girl.

    (38 words)

    Whatever, I suggest that man-boy versus girl would create more interesting conflicts and character chemistry.

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  2. Posted: October 9, 2015In: SciFi

    When a young woman finds out she is a prototype for factory-made humans she needs to run away from her creators who has decided to erase her due to production errors.

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    Added an answer on October 10, 2015 at 8:41 am

    Is this a logline? that belongs in the?"Classics" section, for the movie?"Ex Machina"???? Please clarify. If it's not about "Ex Machina" -- that's the problem: the concept is too similar to the movie.

    Is this a logline? that belongs in the?”Classics” section, for the movie?”Ex Machina”???? Please clarify. If it’s not about “Ex Machina” — that’s the problem: the concept is too similar to the movie.

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  3. Posted: October 9, 2015In: Comedy

    After trashing his friend’s car while drunk, a 20 year old slacker must share a paper route, the only job he can find, with his overachieving 12 year old sister to pay for the damages and avoid jail time.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 10, 2015 at 8:29 am

    The logline needs to clarify the character's predicament. "Unruly party" does not necessarily mean there was wanton destruction.? And "college dropout" doesn't mean he can't find any other job other than delivering papers.? Or even that's he's unemployed.? A person can drop out of college and stillRead more

    The logline needs to clarify the character’s predicament. “Unruly party” does not necessarily mean there was wanton destruction.? And “college dropout” doesn’t mean he can’t find any other job other than delivering papers.? Or even that’s he’s unemployed.? A person can drop out of college and still be employed.

    Also,? in the age of the Internet, how many paper routes actually exist anymore, how viable is it as a plot device (assuming the story is set in the present)?

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