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?After she’s attacked by demons, a teenage amnesiac must discover who or what she is, if she?s to defeat the evil horde that has targeted her.? — Fallen Angel–
The concept is problematical for me, raises more questions that dramatic possibilities, probably because once upon a time I was a theology major.? So my reaction is probably atypical. ? Still, fwiw, demons are merely fallen angels -- same species in the cosmological taxonomy.?? And if the main charaRead more
The concept is problematical for me, raises more questions that dramatic possibilities, probably because once upon a time I was a theology major.? So my reaction is probably atypical. ? Still, fwiw, demons are merely fallen angels — same species in the cosmological taxonomy.?? And if the main character was betrayed by an angel — well, then wouldn’t that treacherous angel be a demon in disguise?
How could the main character be so blind and foolish as to not realize the true nature of the “angel” who betrays her?? That seems to be the precipitating character flaw, but is it also the flaw the main character must overcome in the plot proper?
And why can’t the Big Guy in the sky can’t protect is own?? Or did he allow it to happen?? Is he part of a conspiracy behind a conspiracy? (Like the sorrows and suffering he allowed the Satan to inflict on Job?)
As I said, fwiw.
See lessStory of Catholic clergyman Nicolaus Copernicus who solves the puzzle of the solar system & the Lutheran Mathematics professor who convinces Copernicus to publish.
Alas, one must assume historical amnesia on the part of anyone who reads this logline, that he or she will have little or less knowledge of the central conflict.? To wit, that Copernicus's? meticulously observed findings challenged the established? Catholic church dogma, that the earth was the centeRead more
Alas, one must assume historical amnesia on the part of anyone who reads this logline, that he or she will have little or less knowledge of the central conflict.? To wit, that Copernicus’s? meticulously observed findings challenged the established? Catholic church dogma, that the earth was the center of the universe.
Hence, Copernicus was challenging, undermining the authority of the Church itself.? And at the worst possible time, when Protestant Reformation was also challenging and revolting against the authority of the Catholic Church in matters of faith and doctrine.
That’s the central conflict at stake in the story:?? the authority of the Church in matters of faith, practice, and science.? Suggest reworking the logline to focus on what was really at stake.
See lessWhen raped near to her children, a beautiful widow turns the tables on her attacker revealing she is an ancient harpy raising her young.
So... she eats her attacker alive.? Then what happens? Or is that the end of the story?And if she can eat a man alive, why doesn't she do that before she's raped?? Seems like a woman with that kind of power should be able to take care of herself, take care of any man who threatens her.
So… she eats her attacker alive.? Then what happens? Or is that the end of the story?
And if she can eat a man alive, why doesn’t she do that before she’s raped?? Seems like a woman with that kind of power should be able to take care of herself, take care of any man who threatens her.
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