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Survivors of the premature reformation of the supercontinent Pangaea tell their stories of the days after the disaster.
The film sets up an interesting situation. But "tell their stories" amounts to a string of pearls -- a collection of incidents. A logline is not just about the pearls -- it's also about the string -- the plot that links the pearls. What is the plot that arises from the situation that unifies all theRead more
The film sets up an interesting situation. But “tell their stories” amounts to a string of pearls — a collection of incidents.
A logline is not just about the pearls — it’s also about the string — the plot that links the pearls. What is the plot that arises from the situation that unifies all the incidents in a cause-and-effect sequence?
And who is the lead character?
See less?When a rookie undercover officer mistakenly finds himself admitted to a college that trains criminals, he will have to play a balancing act in order to please his superiors and prove he's one of the guys.?
Why doesn't he want to let the people whom he works for and with know he's enrolled? What is the purpose of his "balancing act"; that is, what is his objective goal? What's at stake: what does he stand to gain if he succeeds? What will he lose if he fails? And what's the genre? A cop/crime comedy orRead more
Why doesn’t he want to let the people whom he works for and with know he’s enrolled?
What is the purpose of his “balancing act”; that is, what is his objective goal?
What’s at stake: what does he stand to gain if he succeeds? What will he lose if he fails?
And what’s the genre? A cop/crime comedy or a cop/crime drama?
See lessA woman whose mother was murdered when she was a child of twelve, is now, fifteen years later, working as a detective and still pursuing her mother's killer, who, it turns out, is closer than she thinks.
Then shoot for a target maximum length of 30. While not the ideal, it's tolerable, permissible. I think you have a concept for an interesting story, particularly the psychological impact off his discovery at a vulnerable age. He may be a geek, intellectually advanced for his years, but emotionally hRead more
Then shoot for a target maximum length of 30. While not the ideal, it’s tolerable, permissible.
I think you have a concept for an interesting story, particularly the psychological impact off his discovery at a vulnerable age. He may be a geek, intellectually advanced for his years, but emotionally he’s still only a 10-year old boy. In the gap therein lies an interesting subjective story line to complement and deepen the main story line.
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