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In a last-ditch effort to get rid of her eye sore car, a paranoid business woman risks being mugged in a particularly shady part of town by an unknown and potentially dangerous buyer.
But what's the risk to her? Seems like the student is the one taking the risk. She's dumping her eye sore on him. >>>Probably need a stronger goal than just ?find happiness? though. Yep. Everyone wants to find happiness. But, in terms of drama, is not an objective goal. It's a subjective want. And,Read more
But what’s the risk to her? Seems like the student is the one taking the risk. She’s dumping her eye sore on him.
>>>Probably need a stronger goal than just ?find happiness? though.
Yep. Everyone wants to find happiness. But, in terms of drama, is not an objective goal. It’s a subjective want. And, in reel life as in real life, happiness is a end product, the consequence of achieving a goal.
See lessIn a last-ditch effort to get rid of her eye sore car, a paranoid business woman risks being mugged in a particularly shady part of town by an unknown and potentially dangerous buyer.
The logline suggests a concept -- but not a plot. And loglines are about the plot, a specific course of action. "Redefines her understanding of success and life's purpose" is vague and indeterminate. What's the visual on "success and life's purpose"? Which is to say, how will the audience know fromRead more
The logline suggests a concept — but not a plot. And loglines are about the plot, a specific course of action. “Redefines her understanding of success and life’s purpose” is vague and indeterminate. What’s the visual on “success and life’s purpose”? Which is to say, how will the audience know from looking at the screen whether she has succeeded or failed?
As a result of meeting the college student, what becomes her objective goal?
See lessWho/what opposes her struggle for that goal?
What is the character flaw that she must overcome to achieve her goal?
What are the stakes, that is what does she stand to gain if she succeeds, lose if she fails?
On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner, Uncles Mark and Robert, help their family come to terms with alcoholism, an issue threatening to destroy a beloved nephew.
Still confused. "On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner" refers to who? And who is the protagonist?
Still confused. “On the eve of their 50th wedding anniversary dinner” refers to who?
And who is the protagonist?
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