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An alter consciously riddled coma patient continues the struggle for his life and identity when he startles into traumatic recovery in search of a mysterious girl with an image
"Alter consciously riddled"? ???? What does that mean?"A mysterious girl with an image".? ???The logline is confusing.? I have no clear idea what the story is about.Nor what the stakes are.? Stakes as in: So what if he doesn't find the mysterious girl?? What does he stand to lose, how will he sufferRead more
“Alter consciously riddled”? ???? What does that mean?
“A mysterious girl with an image”.? ???
The logline is confusing.? I have no clear idea what the story is about.
Nor what the stakes are.? Stakes as in: So what if he doesn’t find the mysterious girl?? What does he stand to lose, how will he suffer if he fails?? And why should an audience care whether he finds her or not?
See lessWhen a man seeking popularity is rejected by society by being forced into a cursed ghost costume, he must learn to live independently in order to remove it before he’s permanently trapped and forgotten.
It seems to me that? the premise overlooks a more interesting? option (particularly for a comedy):? ironic punishment.? That is, punish him by granting him his wish.? Overwhelm him with popular support, viral videos, twitter followers, celebrity status, his own spectacularly lucrative product line.Read more
It seems to me that? the premise overlooks a more interesting? option (particularly for a comedy):? ironic punishment.? That is, punish him by granting him his wish.? Overwhelm him with popular support, viral videos, twitter followers, celebrity status, his own spectacularly lucrative product line. He’s hounded by packs of paparazzi, the lead story on TMZ every night — he out-Kardashians the Kardashians, out-Oprahs Oprah, until…
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See lessAfter a timid young adult is saved from armed assailants by a beautiful vampire, he is manipulated and trained by her coven to track down his elusive uncle: the de facto leader of the vampire hunters.
I think Richiev's rewrite is an improvement over the original logline in that it? correctly puts the seductive vampire in the driver's seat of? the plot. But then she seems to subcontract the mission of accomplishing the objective goal to the nephew.? I believe that a defining characteristic of theRead more
I think Richiev’s rewrite is an improvement over the original logline in that it? correctly puts the seductive vampire in the driver’s seat of? the plot.
But then she seems to subcontract the mission of accomplishing the objective goal to the nephew.? I believe that a defining characteristic of the protagonist in a plot is that it she is the character tasked with the dirty, difficult task of carrying out the mission.? The nephew, in this case, is only a supporting character, a weak-minded dupe at that.
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