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  1. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Public

    When her agent drops her, a shy ?love story? author attends a horror movie workshop where screenwriters are kept prisoner by a perverse guru who makes them die like their characters, so that only the best writer will survive.

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    Added an answer on August 6, 2015 at 12:05 am

    And again, it seems to be a story of a random act of heartless sadism. What is the guru's motivation for subjecting the writer's to such torture? And again, I point to "Saw" where Jigsaw's choice of victims and torture is more than a random act of heartless sadism.

    And again, it seems to be a story of a random act of heartless sadism. What is the guru’s motivation for subjecting the writer’s to such torture? And again, I point to “Saw” where Jigsaw’s choice of victims and torture is more than a random act of heartless sadism.

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2015In: Examples

    Hazel and Augustus, two teenagers who meet in a cancer support group travel to Amsterdam and discover the depths of love, pain, and sacrifice.

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    Added an answer on August 5, 2015 at 11:54 pm

    A teenage girl afflicted with stage 4 cancer risks her fragile health to fulfill her dream by traveling to Amsterdam to meet the author of her favorite book. (28 words, 157 characters) The logline does nothing to evoke the chemistry of the love story between Hazel Grace Lancaster and Augustus WatersRead more

    A teenage girl afflicted with stage 4 cancer risks her fragile health to fulfill her dream by traveling to Amsterdam to meet the author of her favorite book. (28 words, 157 characters)

    The logline does nothing to evoke the chemistry of the love story between Hazel Grace Lancaster and Augustus Waters, but the focus of a logline is the plot. And Hazel Grace’s dream of meeting the author of “An Imperial Affliction”, who resides overseas in Amsterdam, is the motivation for the plot that frames the story and the relationship of the two teens, both cancer survivors.

    The movie was not based on a story concept that came out of nowhere. It was an adaptation of a best-selling YA book. The concept had been pre-tested and proven to be a winner. So its fate was not contingent on a logline.

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2015In: Public

    A retired golf enthusiast is scammed out of his life savings and a country club membership, but when he sees an old man die and moves up to number five on the waiting list, he devises a killer plan to jump to #1

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    Added an answer on August 4, 2015 at 12:03 pm

    What mrliteral said. Seems like he's pursuing the wrong goal for the wrong reason.

    What mrliteral said. Seems like he’s pursuing the wrong goal for the wrong reason.

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