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?Hands of Stone? Boxer turned attorney, Maxx Cohen, takes off the gloves fighting an uphill battle with ruthless federal prosecutors while bobbing and weaving his way through representing the New York Mafia.
What Nir Shelter said. And the main character is not exactly a sympathetic guy-- he represents the bad guys. That's not necessarily an immediate concept killer but it is a potential one. The character would need to be so compelling, so interesting that the audience will want to watch his "bobbing anRead more
What Nir Shelter said. And the main character is not exactly a sympathetic guy– he represents the bad guys. That’s not necessarily an immediate concept killer but it is a potential one. The character would need to be so compelling, so interesting that the audience will want to watch his “bobbing and weaving” in spite of his clientele.
It’s better to frame the story with a specific case, a specific legal battle.
And what’s at stake? So he loses in court. What is lost for the main character. It’s the bad guys who go to prison — not the lawyer. And he will collects his fat fees anyway, right? So what’s his jeopardy? What is there for the audience to worry about? What does he stand to lose if his clients lose in court?
See lessWhile trying to fix a noisy microwave, an appliance repair old man tells to his apprentice the strangest stories he witnessed in his job: a single mother hypnotized by her washing machine, an electronics hobbyist tuning a ultrablack screen TV set, a neglected housewife in love with her refrigerator.
Seems more like a string of pearls, a collection of stories, anecdotes about sundry people and their appliances than a plot. Who is the protagonist? The repair man seems to be nothing more than a narrator. What's the objective goal, the dramatic point of all these stories? What is at stake?
Seems more like a string of pearls, a collection of stories, anecdotes about sundry people and their appliances than a plot. Who is the protagonist? The repair man seems to be nothing more than a narrator. What’s the objective goal, the dramatic point of all these stories? What is at stake?
See lessGerald Tinkers rise to track and football stardom as told through his mothers? eyes, culminates with a gold medal in the ?72 Munich Olympics.
There are thousands of stories of athletes with "dreams of gold" and athletic stardom. What makes Gerald Tinker's story different, unique, stand out from the pack?
There are thousands of stories of athletes with “dreams of gold” and athletic stardom. What makes Gerald Tinker’s story different, unique, stand out from the pack?
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