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A dissociative identity disorder sufferer starts hunting a clandestine agency who, he believes, have artificially created his condition to hide a ruthless assassin within his own mind.
Thanks for the clarification. What if the synthesized/artificial persona were to ultimately prevail? Now that might be an interesting twist worth exploring for its dramatic possibilities and thematic ramifications. fwiw.
Thanks for the clarification. What if the synthesized/artificial persona were to ultimately prevail? Now that might be an interesting twist worth exploring for its dramatic possibilities and thematic ramifications.
fwiw.
See lessWhen a 17 year-old does a work for the dole program at a Sydney Car Wash for a businessman, he becomes entangled into his shady world while his dreams of wrestling at the 2000 Olympic Games becomes more and more distant by the year. Note: This is a TV pilot.
I don't have a sufficient handle on the logline to condense the concept except to suggest that you move the kid's objective goal to the beginning of the logline; the complications would follow. Because the first question a logline reader wants to know is: what does the main character want to accomplRead more
I don’t have a sufficient handle on the logline to condense the concept except to suggest that you move the kid’s objective goal to the beginning of the logline; the complications would follow. Because the first question a logline reader wants to know is: what does the main character want to accomplish? In this case, he wants to wrestle in the Olympics. I shouldn’t have to wade through 27 words before I find that out.
See lessA dissociative identity disorder sufferer starts hunting a clandestine agency who, he believes, have artificially created his condition to hide a ruthless assassin within his own mind.
It seems like a version of the durable Dr. Jekyll-Mr. Hyde trope. What's the hook, the unique twist that re-invents the classic story?
It seems like a version of the durable Dr. Jekyll-Mr. Hyde trope. What’s the hook, the unique twist that re-invents the classic story?
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