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  1. Posted: June 30, 2015In: Public

    With only 24 hours before her life support machine is switched off, a coma patient is given a second chance when she is recruited by an organisation that operates within the human subconscious to help stop a terror group that controls people via their dreams.

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    Added an answer on June 30, 2015 at 11:36 am

    If the soviet mind control program was actually any good, wouldn't the Soviet Union still exist?

    If the soviet mind control program was actually any good, wouldn’t the Soviet Union still exist?

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  2. Posted: June 28, 2015

    During an intergalactic war a unit of elite soldiers has to stop one of their own who is now under the control of the enemy?s sentient doomsday weapon, a virtually indestructible miles long warship whose goal is the destruction of all humanity.

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    Added an answer on June 30, 2015 at 6:35 am

    As Nir Shelter said. As written, the logline suggests an ensemble cast. There is no protagonist, which means there is no bait to get a bankable star to attach to the project, enhance its prospects of getting produced.

    As Nir Shelter said. As written, the logline suggests an ensemble cast. There is no protagonist, which means there is no bait to get a bankable star to attach to the project, enhance its prospects of getting produced.

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  3. Posted: June 30, 2015In: Public

    A world class triathlon athlete competes in a town where he was a torturer in his former life. Karma catches up, not only with him, but his whole team.

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    Added an answer on June 30, 2015 at 6:29 am

    The logline presents a protagonist who is totally the victim of the plot (aka: karma). It lacks a specific inciting incident and a specific objective goal. The antagonist is undefined (karma again). "Torture and Horror" are generalities instead of specifics.

    The logline presents a protagonist who is totally the victim of the plot (aka: karma). It lacks a specific inciting incident and a specific objective goal. The antagonist is undefined (karma again). “Torture and Horror” are generalities instead of specifics.

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