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  1. Posted: July 6, 2015In: Public

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 6, 2015 at 11:12 pm

    >> Look at The Spectacular Now, >>Look at the perks of being a wallflower Adapted from books. The books sold the stories, not the loglines. The stories were pre-pitched for Hollywood in the YA book market.

    >> Look at The Spectacular Now,
    >>Look at the perks of being a wallflower

    Adapted from books. The books sold the stories, not the loglines. The stories were pre-pitched for Hollywood in the YA book market.

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  2. Posted: July 4, 2015In: Public

    A directionless raft guide enlists his professional athlete friends to help him find a mysterious woman in the forest who called upon him to save her, then disappeared.

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    Added an answer on July 5, 2015 at 3:13 am

    As Lee Brooks said. What are the stakes? What does the guy and gal stand to gain if he succeeds? What is lost if he fails? And whatever the protagonist's character flaw or weakness, it should directly relate to the objective goal; that is, it should be a flaw or personal problem that raises complicaRead more

    As Lee Brooks said. What are the stakes? What does the guy and gal stand to gain if he succeeds? What is lost if he fails?

    And whatever the protagonist’s character flaw or weakness, it should directly relate to the objective goal; that is, it should be a flaw or personal problem that raises complications, doubt, suspense as to the protagonist’s ability to achieve his goal. I don’t see how being “directionless” creates any particular complication or doubt as to his ability to find/rescue the girl.

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  3. Posted: June 30, 2015In: Public

    When a 17 year-old does a work for the dole program at a Sydney Car Wash for a businessman, he becomes entangled into his shady world while his dreams of wrestling at the 2000 Olympic Games becomes more and more distant by the year. Note: This is a TV pilot.

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    Added an answer on July 3, 2015 at 4:33 am

    The most important element to adapt from "Breaking Bad" is an attention grabbing pilot episode, one that hooks the audience, makes them want to tune in next week to see what happens next.

    The most important element to adapt from “Breaking Bad” is an attention grabbing pilot episode, one that hooks the audience, makes them want to tune in next week to see what happens next.

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