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When a woman?s badly burnt body is discovered, an occult writer investigates a strange Christian sect. She must escape the cult and expose their evil.
>>You?re not really joining the dots Tell me! And I shouldn't have to join dots. The plot should be obvious, something I, or anyone else reading the logline should immediately grasp. You describe the cult as "Christian" and then describe their practices as designed to appease "gods". Say what? ThoseRead more
>>You?re not really joining the dots
Tell me! And I shouldn’t have to join dots. The plot should be obvious, something I, or anyone else reading the logline should immediately grasp.
You describe the cult as “Christian” and then describe their practices as designed to appease “gods”. Say what? Those two terms are theologically incommensurate. It’s like saying kangaroos lay eggs.
See lessWhen an ambitious underdog makes a pact with the devil, each time he accepts to restrain his freedom to go to some place, the devil grants him a wish, but as he buys his rise in society, his world become smaller and smaller, until he realizes the real consequences for him, his relatives, and humanity and that he needs to break the spell.
Nope. Who gave him the guy the authority, the power to "give away the world", piece by piece? If your story involves the character of Lucifer, than it entails (implicitly or explicitly) the character of God. And I should imagine that God would have a thing or two to say about the situation. Not onlyRead more
Nope. Who gave him the guy the authority, the power to “give away the world”, piece by piece?
If your story involves the character of Lucifer, than it entails (implicitly or explicitly) the character of God. And I should imagine that God would have a thing or two to say about the situation.
Not only don’t I understand the plot, I don’t get the dramatic point. What’s your theme?
See lessWhen an ambitious underdog makes a pact with the devil, each time he accepts to restrain his freedom to go to some place, the devil grants him a wish, but as he buys his rise in society, his world become smaller and smaller, until he realizes the real consequences for him, his relatives, and humanity and that he needs to break the spell.
Still confusing. It seems to be a story in the mold of the Faustian bargain, someone makes a pack with Devil, doesn't read the fine print or the price tag until it's too late. But what's so special about this story, what differentiates it from all the other stories about people who are greedy and foRead more
Still confusing. It seems to be a story in the mold of the Faustian bargain, someone makes a pack with Devil, doesn’t read the fine print or the price tag until it’s too late. But what’s so special about this story, what differentiates it from all the other stories about people who are greedy and foolish enough to make deals with the Devil?
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