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When their Uncle is murdered by the Irish Mafia because of their dead father's debt, an honest citizen joins his teenage brother to take their revenge. They must fight against mobsters and the corrupt policemen who control the streets of Boston to ultimately dismantle the oldest crime group in the United States or die trying.
Why not have the father be killed because he can't pay the debt? Make the conflict more immediate, closer to home?
Why not have the father be killed because he can’t pay the debt? Make the conflict more immediate, closer to home?
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>>When a favour is called in a large amount of drugs is discovered missing by a ruthless crime boss Confusing. I don't understand exactly, clearly what the inciting incident is. And what FFF said. While the protagonist may be running away from something he must also concurrently be running toward soRead more
>>When a favour is called in a large amount of drugs is discovered missing by a ruthless crime boss
Confusing. I don’t understand exactly, clearly what the inciting incident is.
And what FFF said. While the protagonist may be running away from something he must also concurrently be running toward something, a solution (objective goal) to his predicament. Dr. Richard Kimble in “The Fugitive” wasn’t just running away from the FBI to avoid being caught, he was running back to Chicago to solve the crime, prove his innocence.
See lessA solitary man unable to sleep for 15 years survives by recording everything he sees and playing it back to differentiate between reality and hallucinations, until he becomes the only witness of a multi million dollar crime and every single person wants to alter his reality.
That is rather radical surgery to the concept. And, it seems to me, unnecessary. I am drawn to the original premise of a man's testimony being in doubt because of momentary hallucinations arising from his disorder. That's the hook.
That is rather radical surgery to the concept. And, it seems to me, unnecessary. I am drawn to the original premise of a man’s testimony being in doubt because of momentary hallucinations arising from his disorder. That’s the hook.
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