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  1. Posted: May 16, 2015In: Public

    When Santa Claus wants to quit work after Saint Nicholas kidnaps his inner child, Santa?s abandend- homeless nine year old daughter must team up with the soulless president of a big European toy company to save the spirit of Christmas.

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    Added an answer on May 17, 2015 at 5:44 am

    My impression is that St Nick & Santa Claus have become conflated in the cultural clutter of Xmas, so I'm afraid that most people will be confused by the logline, won't comprehend the distinction. And what does an "inner child" look like anyway?

    My impression is that St Nick & Santa Claus have become conflated in the cultural clutter of Xmas, so I’m afraid that most people will be confused by the logline, won’t comprehend the distinction. And what does an “inner child” look like anyway?

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2015In: Public

    After being assaulted by his family and the Christian community, a homosexual male is led to decide whether his happiness is more important than his family.

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    Added an answer on May 16, 2015 at 12:49 pm

    All versions of the logline present a generic predicament that many gay men (and women) endure. But none of them present a specific course of action that this particular gay person takes as a result of the rejection and conflict. What does "led to decide" mean in terms of a specific objective goal tRead more

    All versions of the logline present a generic predicament that many gay men (and women) endure. But none of them present a specific course of action that this particular gay person takes as a result of the rejection and conflict. What does “led to decide” mean in terms of a specific objective goal the young man struggles for? For the purposes of drama, “happiness”, while certainly desirable, is a subjective goal. It’s an internal state of mind. But film is about what is external, the visceral that also has a visual component. What is the visual for “happiness” for this gay man? What’s does it look like?

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  3. Posted: May 15, 2015In: Public

    Two best friends who have desk jobs at a top secret spy agency are suddenly thrown into a massive conspiracy caused by a rogue agent.

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    Added an answer on May 16, 2015 at 8:40 am

    Yep, a situation, but no story, no plot. What's the conspiracy? What's the mission? What's at stake if they fail?

    Yep, a situation, but no story, no plot. What’s the conspiracy? What’s the mission? What’s at stake if they fail?

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