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  1. Posted: May 23, 2015In: Public

    When his bride loses her memory of him a week before the wedding, an unromantic guy's guy must restore it by recreating their courtship?s most romantic moments or face losing the love of his life.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 23, 2015 at 8:02 am

    What Rutger said. What we now know about how the brain creates -- and loses -- memories it's not credible that he can restore her memories by repeating past actions and events. What's lost is lost irretrievably; he's got to start all over again.

    What Rutger said.

    What we now know about how the brain creates — and loses — memories it’s not credible that he can restore her memories by repeating past actions and events. What’s lost is lost irretrievably; he’s got to start all over again.

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  2. Posted: May 18, 2015In: Public

    After a big CEO threatens to convert their inherited community TV station into a home shopping channel. Two brothers must find the worst talent to produce the worst shows in order to make the CEO lose interest and give them back their station to uphold their dying father's wish.

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    Added an answer on May 22, 2015 at 3:11 am

    After a hostile buyout of their TV station, two brothers deliberately produce the worst shows, to lower ratings and force the greedy CEO to sell back their shares. (28 words) Notes: "Dying father..." -- backstory, mostly? Necessary for the story and to explain the brother's emotional attachment to tRead more

    After a hostile buyout of their TV station, two brothers deliberately produce the worst shows, to lower ratings and force the greedy CEO to sell back their shares. (28 words)

    Notes:
    “Dying father…” — backstory, mostly? Necessary for the story and to explain the brother’s emotional attachment to the station, but extraneous for the logline?

    “Inept” — Then they would already be producing lousy shows prior to the hostile buyout — wouldn’t they? So they wouldn’t have to do anything different (which the inciting incident should compel) than continue to be as inept as they were before, right? Or does inept refer to something else beside their bad taste in programming that the inciting incident plays off, forces them to confront and overcome?
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    “Deliberately” — an intention decision , a change of tactics triggered by the inciting incident. They know darn well what they’re doing.

    “…only to find enormous success online” — a plot twist, unintended, but is it really essential to the logline? Let’s just say I could see that plot twist coming from a country mile in earlier iterations of your concept. I figure most other script readers would also. After all there has to be a big midpoint reversal — what else could it be?

    And it seems to me that part of ironical twist might be that now they’re stuck producing the kind of programming they despise — it’s the only way to get back ownership [short run] and retain their independence, i.e. financial solvency [long run]. The kind of programming they really want to produce doesn’t pay the bills.

    IOW: stretch them out further on the rack of their dilemma with more than just the cords of financial independence.

    fwiw.

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  3. Posted: May 18, 2015In: Public

    After a big CEO threatens to convert their inherited community TV station into a home shopping channel. Two brothers must find the worst talent to produce the worst shows in order to make the CEO lose interest and give them back their station to uphold their dying father's wish.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 20, 2015 at 6:07 am

    Now flipping over the role of the angel's advocate: For the strategy of driving down the value of station to work, there has to be an adversary with a stake in wanting the value to stay high. (It can't be the CEO; he wants to buy low). Like another faction of the family that wants to cash out, sellRead more

    Now flipping over the role of the angel’s advocate:

    For the strategy of driving down the value of station to work, there has to be an adversary with a stake in wanting the value to stay high. (It can’t be the CEO; he wants to buy low). Like another faction of the family that wants to cash out, sell their interest, and NEEDS to sell high, for as much money as they can get.

    Then the brothers strategy make sense in the reel and real world: they want to drive down the value to dissuade the other faction from selling out. And penalize them financially if they do sell because the feuding faction won’t have the money they NEED to pay off debts, maintain the lifestyle to which they’ve become accustomed, whatever.

    IOW: have a family feud. Pit one faction of the family against another.

    fwiw

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