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When a disgraced former agent starts seeing a hallucination claiming to be a AI downloaded into his mind, he must team with his secretive partner to stop the agent’s former clandestine agency from activating a devastating machine the AI’s designed to protect.
Why would a computer program select a loser to save itself?
Why would a computer program select a loser to save itself?
See lessWhen her favorite dream-streamer stops sharing his dreams, a rigid executive must help him dream again to win the contract of her life before her nightmares destroy her temper.
To re-iterate, I think the concept is promising And I like the fact that the protagonist is a woman (for a change). But... If she really is self-assured, why would she need the dreamstreamer? Why would she suffer night mares and/or lack the self-assurance to confront them instead of resorting to anoRead more
To re-iterate, I think the concept is promising And I like the fact that the protagonist is a woman (for a change). But…
If she really is self-assured, why would she need the dreamstreamer? Why would she suffer night mares and/or lack the self-assurance to confront them instead of resorting to anodyne substitutes?
Also the stated goal is framed in a negative mode: she wants to avoid — she’s running away from an unpleasant situation. I suggest her goal needs to be framed positively: she should be struggling toward something, not away from something. Either she should be struggling to find a positive alternative or to transform a losing situation into a winning one.
In terms of the actual plot, her initial reaction might be to struggle desperately to re-activate the dreamstream — but that’s the weakest choice. Eventually she must struggle toward a something better, a stronger choice– character growth — and that is what the logline should suggest.
See lessWhen a Hercules bank plane crash lands in the desert, a young experienced gunslinger and his brothers must battle against an assortment of mercenaries down a long desert road to get to the money first before the military arrive.
Why should I care or want the bounty hunter to get the money? What makes him more worthy of the loot than all the others converging on the crash scene?
Why should I care or want the bounty hunter to get the money? What makes him more worthy of the loot than all the others converging on the crash scene?
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