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  1. Posted: April 16, 2015In: Public

    Abducted as a small child, a college hoop star must endure a season of unexpected obstacles when he sets out to find his long-lost dad.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 16, 2015 at 12:15 pm

    What is the incident that triggers his disbelief in her story, that sends him searching for his dad? What is the crisis in his faith that compels him to seek out his father? (Were he to be illegitimate, it's no sin on his part.)

    What is the incident that triggers his disbelief in her story, that sends him searching for his dad? What is the crisis in his faith that compels him to seek out his father? (Were he to be illegitimate, it’s no sin on his part.)

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  2. Posted: April 13, 2015In: Public

    A low-level thief goes back in time to alter his family’s life for the better, but discovers his changes have created a new timeline where his wife is dead. As he attempts to reset the timeline, he’ll find himself hunted by his powerful alternate self who’s determined to hold onto this new future.

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    Added an answer on April 16, 2015 at 11:10 am

    The math on this is way too complicated and at the moment, I don't know how to simplify it. I suggest that the reason he goes back in time should not be for himself but for the love of his life; he wants to become a winner who can offer her the life she deserves. Only to discover his new life as a wRead more

    The math on this is way too complicated and at the moment, I don’t know how to simplify it.

    I suggest that the reason he goes back in time should not be for himself but for the love of his life; he wants to become a winner who can offer her the life she deserves. Only to discover his new life as a winner entails losing the one thing he loved in his old life. Be careful what you wish for.

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  3. Posted: April 16, 2015In: Public

    Abducted as a small child, a college hoop star must endure a season of unexpected obstacles when he sets out to find his long-lost dad.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 16, 2015 at 10:13 am

    Having observed this concept through several iterations, I've drawn the following inferences: 1] The main character had lousy parents. And a lousy childhood. 2] In spite of that, he's managed to become a college hoop star. 3] Now he's got to locate his long lost dad. 4] The story is informed by a reRead more

    Having observed this concept through several iterations, I’ve drawn the following inferences:

    1] The main character had lousy parents. And a lousy childhood.
    2] In spite of that, he’s managed to become a college hoop star.
    3] Now he’s got to locate his long lost dad.
    4] The story is informed by a religious theme.

    What I still don’t understand is:

    1] Why is it suddenly urgent that he locate his long lost dad? Why NOW?
    2] What’s at stake? If he doesn’t find his father, what will he suffer, what will he lose?
    3] What has the religious theme got to do with basketball? (Obviously, if I lived in Indiana, I wouldn’t ask that question; it would be self-evident. But since, I, as well as most viewers don’t live in Indiana….) The religious theme, I’m guessing, ties all the seemingly disparate elements together, but I am clueless as to how that might happen.

    [And “unexpected obstacles” is a tautology. It’s the nature of dramatic obstacles that they are unexpected.]

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