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  1. Posted: April 10, 2015In: Public

    After he's framed for murder, a young man must go on the run from the CIA with a ruthless assassin in order to shut down the black market crime syndicate that killed his parents and stop a devastating terrorist attack.

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    Added an answer on April 15, 2015 at 5:06 am

    Good point. The CIA does not get involved in routine homicides. He had to kill someone critical to national security -- outside the borders of the US. If the crime is committed in the US, he would be pursued by the FBI.

    Good point. The CIA does not get involved in routine homicides. He had to kill someone critical to national security — outside the borders of the US. If the crime is committed in the US, he would be pursued by the FBI.

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  2. Posted: April 14, 2015In: Public

    A devout college athlete, raised under an assumed identity, must defy his felonious mother to uncover the truth about his missing dad.

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    Added an answer on April 15, 2015 at 4:49 am

    The defining characteristic of the main character "devout" teases me with a clue as to what might be at stake for him -- his faith, his fidelity to his religious convictions. How can one keep the 5th commandment, "Honor thy father and thy mother" when both of them seem to be such awful parents? ButRead more

    The defining characteristic of the main character “devout” teases me with a clue as to what might be at stake for him — his faith, his fidelity to his religious convictions. How can one keep the 5th commandment, “Honor thy father and thy mother” when both of them seem to be such awful parents?

    But these days, when most parents no longer enjoy the status they had in times past, such stakes may not be compelling enough for contemporary, to wit secular, audiences. Or even comprehensible since pop culture exalts rebellion of parental authority as a given norm, yeah, a necessary rite of passage to adulthood.

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  3. Posted: April 13, 2015In: Public

    A perfectionist middle-aged business consultant gets in contact with his childhood sweetheart by an older letter which reminds him of their promise to marry with 35 years, but his flare up feelings are against his lonely structured lifestyle and she is already engaged and will marry soon.

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    Added an answer on April 13, 2015 at 9:27 pm

    A logline should delineate one action, one objective goal the main character seeks to pursue. This logline seems to suggest 2 actions, 2 goals: getting the girl, and resume writing. Which one is the main goal that is to be the basis for the plot?

    A logline should delineate one action, one objective goal the main character seeks to pursue. This logline seems to suggest 2 actions, 2 goals: getting the girl, and resume writing. Which one is the main goal that is to be the basis for the plot?

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