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  1. Posted: March 20, 2015In: Public

    A young British academic visiting America and a besotted underage runaway evade exposure by passing themselves off as uncle and niece while travelling the country together:think Pygmalion/Lolita

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    Added an answer on March 21, 2015 at 4:15 am

    >> What I?ve done is actually quite common. Is it? And Pygmalion and Lolita are 2 starkly different stories. (Which one is more applicable?) >>They travel the country by car. Why would she need a visa? Because the logline says: "A young British academic visiting America" so I inferred the point of oRead more

    >> What I?ve done is actually quite common.

    Is it? And Pygmalion and Lolita are 2 starkly different stories. (Which one is more applicable?)

    >>They travel the country by car. Why would she need a visa?

    Because the logline says: “A young British academic visiting America” so I inferred the point of origin for the story is Great Britain. If he’s already in the US when he hooks up with the girl (who would be American?) then never mind. But the logline ought be clarified as I suspect I am not the only person who would draw the wrong inference.

    In any event, what’s the drama in having them travel around the country? The plot? What are the stakes? What does the academic stand hope to gain, risk losing by getting involved with a runaway teen, foisting himself off to others as her uncle?

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  2. Posted: March 19, 2015In: Public

    In a leisure female-only Utopia where sex is the only taboo, a willful girl must escape from her restrained community to join her lover who has been sent away.

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    Added an answer on March 20, 2015 at 11:45 pm

    1] What are the (negative) stakes? That is, what is the penalty for getting caught trying to reunite with her lover? 2] In this pseudo-utopia are lovers matched up by the ruling hierarchy or are they free to partner up as they wish?

    1] What are the (negative) stakes? That is, what is the penalty for getting caught trying to reunite with her lover?

    2] In this pseudo-utopia are lovers matched up by the ruling hierarchy or are they free to partner up as they wish?

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  3. Posted: March 19, 2015In: Public

    In a leisure female-only Utopia where sex is the only taboo, a willful girl must escape from her restrained community to join her lover who has been sent away.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 20, 2015 at 11:16 pm

    Who is the intended audience for this movie? Why was her lover exiled? And why MUST the protagonist join her? What's at stake? What does the protagonist stand to lose if she fails? What's the risk factor? Will she be killed if she's caught?

    Who is the intended audience for this movie?

    Why was her lover exiled? And why MUST the protagonist join her? What’s at stake? What does the protagonist stand to lose if she fails? What’s the risk factor? Will she be killed if she’s caught?

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