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  1. Posted: March 5, 2015In: Public

    When a reckless special agent, who’s enhanced with mind control technology, is hacked and made to kill his own team, he must expose his would-be puppeteers to prove his innocence, but the closer he gets, the more he finds himself asking: Is he a puppet, and, if so, who’s pulling the strings?

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    Added an answer on March 9, 2015 at 12:17 pm

    >>>he?ll begin to question if what he is doing is really him or the work of someone else. What hooks my interest: what happens when a guy (or gal) who is pulling the strings discovers that someone is pulling his (or her) strings? (3rd Act Big Reveal, 2nd Act mid-point discovery, or 1st Act IncitingRead more

    >>>he?ll begin to question if what he is doing is really him or the work of someone else.

    What hooks my interest: what happens when a guy (or gal) who is pulling the strings discovers that someone is pulling his (or her) strings? (3rd Act Big Reveal, 2nd Act mid-point discovery, or 1st Act Inciting Incident?)

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  2. Posted: March 5, 2015In: Public

    When a reckless special agent, who’s enhanced with mind control technology, is hacked and made to kill his own team, he must expose his would-be puppeteers to prove his innocence, but the closer he gets, the more he finds himself asking: Is he a puppet, and, if so, who’s pulling the strings?

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 9, 2015 at 7:39 am

    >>, is made to kill his own team, So he actually kills the team members? And he is made to do so with the same mind control technology he uses on proxies? >>he must stop the would-be puppeteers from using the same mind control technology to create a perfect controlled society If he's made to kill hiRead more

    >>, is made to kill his own team,

    So he actually kills the team members? And he is made to do so with the same mind control technology he uses on proxies?

    >>he must stop the would-be puppeteers from using the same mind control technology to create a perfect controlled society

    If he’s made to kill his team, that is, if his mind is already being controlled by the technology, if he himself is a proxy– then what free will agency does he have to stop the people who are playing him as a puppet?

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  3. Posted: March 8, 2015In: Public

    When a White House security guard thinks he prevented a Boeing 747 from crashing in to the White House, by killing a supposed hijacker (in front of him) that whispers Allahoe akbar, he is accused of first degree murder and sentences to death. Franz Kafka’s "Der Prozess" meets ?

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    Added an answer on March 8, 2015 at 10:37 pm

    I think there are some holes in the credibility of the premise. I suggest you research the U.S. law on what constitutes 1st degree murder, as well as how/when the death penalty in the U.S. is applied. Also, I suggest you research the rigorous screening and training procedures for Secret Service persRead more

    I think there are some holes in the credibility of the premise.

    I suggest you research the U.S. law on what constitutes 1st degree murder, as well as how/when the death penalty in the U.S. is applied.

    Also, I suggest you research the rigorous screening and training procedures for Secret Service personnel, which by definition, is what a White House security guard is. Not just anyone looking for a job can work in the Secret Service.

    Also, even though he’s in the Secret Service, it doesn’t entitle him to carry a gun on a commercial plane. Only U.S. marshals are allowed to. (And how did he clear through the security screening?) With one exception: when members of the First Family, or ex-Presidents (who are entitled to secret service protection) travel on commercial flights, then the agent with them can pack heat.

    So your scenario would have be setup with that one exception. But then there is still the legal issues of what constitutes 1st degree and how/when the death penalty is applied in the US of A.

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