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  1. Posted: March 10, 2015In: Public

    Based on true events. “On holiday, a vain German Luftwaffe officer and his family forget to disembark their train and end up in a Nazi dead camp, not keen on uninvited visitors.?

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    Added an answer on March 10, 2015 at 8:34 am

    The proper English term would not be Arians but Aryans. In quotes, "Aryans", perhaps, to indicate it refers to the bogus Nazi's ideology of racial superiority. And more than just being harmless, they are loyal (in contrast to disloyal Germans).

    The proper English term would not be Arians but Aryans. In quotes, “Aryans”, perhaps, to indicate it refers to the bogus Nazi’s ideology of racial superiority.

    And more than just being harmless, they are loyal (in contrast to disloyal Germans).

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  2. Posted: March 5, 2015In: Public

    When a reckless special agent, who’s enhanced with mind control technology, is hacked and made to kill his own team, he must expose his would-be puppeteers to prove his innocence, but the closer he gets, the more he finds himself asking: Is he a puppet, and, if so, who’s pulling the strings?

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    Added an answer on March 9, 2015 at 11:14 pm

    Or tease the audience with an "Inception"-like ending. And whet their appetite for a sequel or 2 or 3 that finally resolves the ambiguity. Maybe that's the protagonist's quest, to find out if he's acting out of his own free will or if he's only a puppet. And if the latter, how can he liberate his coRead more

    Or tease the audience with an “Inception”-like ending. And whet their appetite for a sequel or 2 or 3 that finally resolves the ambiguity. Maybe that’s the protagonist’s quest, to find out if he’s acting out of his own free will or if he’s only a puppet. And if the latter, how can he liberate his consciousness from the technology — and liberate humanity?

    As I said I like the underlying premise, but I am not sure that the logline conveys a glimpse of a plot that delivers on the promise of that premise. I can envision story lines going in several directions. But it’s your story, so you have to figure out which one you want to explore. Best wishes.

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  3. Posted: March 8, 2015In: Public

    When a White House security guard thinks he prevented a Boeing 747 from crashing in to the White House, by killing a supposed hijacker (in front of him) that whispers Allahoe akbar, he is accused of first degree murder and sentences to death. Franz Kafka’s "Der Prozess" meets ?

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    Added an answer on March 9, 2015 at 12:20 pm

    As described in the logline, it is highly unlikely he would be charged with 1st degree murder in a U.S. Court, even more unlikely that he would get the death penalty.

    As described in the logline, it is highly unlikely he would be charged with 1st degree murder in a U.S. Court, even more unlikely that he would get the death penalty.

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