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A crazed sidekick searching for a new villain sets her sights on a mild-mannered journalist with a powerful secret.
Sidekick to who?? What is her role, her regular job?Why is she searching for a new villain?? Out of spite, out of malevalence, out of boredom, or....?Does she know the journalist;s secret?? If not, then what motivates her to target him?
Sidekick to who?? What is her role, her regular job?
Why is she searching for a new villain?? Out of spite, out of malevalence, out of boredom, or….?
Does she know the journalist;s secret?? If not, then what motivates her to target him?
See lessA journalist who escaped an abusive religious cult plans to sneak back in and get his younger brother out, but his plan goes awry when the cult leader’s prophecies come true and all current members receive supernatural powers.
I believe that the most important part of a logline is the story hook, the element that grabs attention, arouses curiusity, makes people want to read the script. This logline buries the story hook when it should lead with it.The plot, the really interesting part, begins: "when the prophecies come trRead more
I believe that the most important part of a logline is the story hook, the element that grabs attention, arouses curiusity, makes people want to read the script. This logline buries the story hook when it should lead with it.
The plot, the really interesting part, begins: “when the prophecies come true and all current members receive supernatural powers.”
Unfortunately, the logline doesn’t specify whether the powers are beneficial or harmful. If cult members start healing the sick, raising the dead, what’s the problem? Isn’t that a good thing?
Well, the logline is tagged as a horror flick so I guess it’s safe to assume the powers aren’t a good thing.? Okay,? in what way? What specific threat do they pose? And what can the journalist, a mere mortal, do about it? What can anyone do about it?
As a result of this fulfillment of prophecy, what becomes the journalist’s objective goal?
See lessAs she attempts another comeback, a bottom of the bottle b list movie queen recounts her rise to the top.
A logline is a summary of the plot.? And a plot faces forward in time, not backwards.? A plot is about where a character wants to go in the future, not where she's been in the past.Flashbacks may serve a purpose in the script to explain how the character came to be washed up,. But the logline shouldRead more
A logline is a summary of the plot.? And a plot faces forward in time, not backwards.? A plot is about where a character wants to go in the future, not where she’s been in the past.
Flashbacks may serve a purpose in the script to explain how the character came to be washed up,. But the logline should be framed in terms of and focus on her future goal, her struggle for a comeback.
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