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  1. Posted: October 25, 2019In: Family

    To save their planet, a couple of aliens have come to earth in order to find the resources that help them develop their super powers.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 26, 2019 at 8:37 am

    How do humans react?? What dramatic problem does their arrival create for humans?? Do the aliens pose a threat or do peple fear there is a threat??Who is the audience supposed to root for, the aliens, or, as in the case of "The Arrival" a human who understands and sympathizes with their quest, thatRead more

    How do humans react?? What dramatic problem does their arrival create for humans?? Do the aliens pose a threat or do peple fear there is a threat??

    Who is the audience supposed to root for, the aliens, or, as in the case of “The Arrival” a human who understands and sympathizes with their quest, that they are benign??

    What are the stakes for homo sapiens sapiens?

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  2. Posted: October 25, 2019In: SciFi

    Uluru-Kata (Part Two) When a posthuman boy, trying to integrate into a tribe of pygmies, meets other humans like him, he decides to resume his voyage to the Promise Land with his robot father in order to avoid his species extinction.

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    Added an answer on October 25, 2019 at 2:45 am

    This lobline leaves me more puzzled, than informed.? Is there an Ulur-Kata, (Part One)?? What does Ulur-Kata mean or refer to, anyway? And what is a post-human boy?? At first I thought he is a new, totally distinct species from homo sapiens sapiens. Then logline says he "meets other humans like him"Read more

    This lobline leaves me more puzzled, than informed.? Is there an Ulur-Kata, (Part One)?? What does Ulur-Kata mean or refer to, anyway?

    And what is a post-human boy?? At first I thought he is a new, totally distinct species from homo sapiens sapiens. Then logline says he “meets other humans like him”?? So which is it?? And what awaits him at the Promise Land (where/what is that?) that will ensure the survival of his species, whatever it is? (And I presume species survival is the stakes — the reason he must sojourn.)

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  3. Posted: October 24, 2019In: SciFi

    When a Commander of the largest military force in the universe, telepathically thwarts an assassination attempt by an obstinately powerful female warrior. He tricks her into facing and ultimately destroying her evil mirror double. A double that’s the source of her own power.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 24, 2019 at 10:17 pm

    As yqwertz inquired.? The commander seems to be in the driver's seat of the plot, ergo, the protagonist.? In any case,, he comes off as an unsympathetic top dog.? I presume the audience is supposed to root for the underdog, the female warrior.?? If that is the case, then the logline should be framedRead more

    As yqwertz inquired.? The commander seems to be in the driver’s seat of the plot, ergo, the protagonist.? In any case,, he comes off as an unsympathetic top dog.? I presume the audience is supposed to root for the underdog, the female warrior.?? If that is the case, then the logline should be framed from the pov of the character the audience is to root for.

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