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  1. Posted: December 30, 2014In: Public

    After the death of an elderly millionaire, his estranged offspring haul their families cross-country in order to retrieve their deceased father’s inheritance.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 1, 2015 at 1:37 pm

    As Nir Shelter said. And there ought to be stakes. They don't just want the money, they desperately need it (to stave off bankruptcy, pay for an expensive, life-saving operation, etc.). And soon.

    As Nir Shelter said.

    And there ought to be stakes. They don’t just want the money, they desperately need it (to stave off bankruptcy, pay for an expensive, life-saving operation, etc.). And soon.

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  2. Posted: December 30, 2014In: Public

    After the death of an elderly millionaire, his estranged offspring haul their families cross-country in order to retrieve their deceased father’s inheritance.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 1, 2015 at 1:37 pm

    As Nir Shelter said. And there ought to be stakes. They don't just want the money, they desperately need it (to stave off bankruptcy, pay for an expensive, life-saving operation, etc.). And soon.

    As Nir Shelter said.

    And there ought to be stakes. They don’t just want the money, they desperately need it (to stave off bankruptcy, pay for an expensive, life-saving operation, etc.). And soon.

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2014In: Public

    An ex couple accidentally gets locked in the basement at a New Years Party and are forced to speak about their past, present and future.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 31, 2014 at 8:53 am

    Yeah, the story would benefit from ticking time bomb as in "Phone Booth" to raise the stakes and escalate tension. No stakes+ No escalating tension = boredom. And boring an audience is the one unforgivable sin in cinema.

    Yeah, the story would benefit from ticking time bomb as in “Phone Booth” to raise the stakes and escalate tension. No stakes+ No escalating tension = boredom. And boring an audience is the one unforgivable sin in cinema.

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