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Sophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
>> set the film 10 years in the future when the world is on the brink of a global warming disaster... Sheesh! What a pessimist! I'm a cock-eyed optimist; I give our 3rd rock from the sun at least 11 years. ;-) What's the itch you're trying to scratch? Okay, your story hooks into a too current event,Read more
>> set the film 10 years in the future when the world is on the brink of a global warming disaster…
Sheesh! What a pessimist! I’m a cock-eyed optimist; I give our 3rd rock from the sun at least 11 years. 😉
What’s the itch you’re trying to scratch? Okay, your story hooks into a too current event, the impending calamity of an over carbonated, over heated atmosphere. But what’s your dramatic point of stirring aliens into the plot?
See lessSophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
>> set the film 10 years in the future when the world is on the brink of a global warming disaster... Sheesh! What a pessimist! I'm a cock-eyed optimist; I give our 3rd rock from the sun at least 11 years. ;-) What's the itch you're trying to scratch? Okay, your story hooks into a too current event,Read more
>> set the film 10 years in the future when the world is on the brink of a global warming disaster…
Sheesh! What a pessimist! I’m a cock-eyed optimist; I give our 3rd rock from the sun at least 11 years. 😉
What’s the itch you’re trying to scratch? Okay, your story hooks into a too current event, the impending calamity of an over carbonated, over heated atmosphere. But what’s your dramatic point of stirring aliens into the plot?
See lessA naive, anxiety-ridden film student uses documentary to interview strangers about their first time experiences in order to overcome her fear of all things unfamiliar.
The logline describes an an interesting situation -- but not a plot. Unfortunately, "overcome her fear of all things unfamiliar", is too general to qualify as a specific goal. The logline should state a specific objective goal she needs to achieve, something important, something she desperately MUSTRead more
The logline describes an an interesting situation — but not a plot. Unfortunately, “overcome her fear of all things unfamiliar”, is too general to qualify as a specific goal.
The logline should state a specific objective goal she needs to achieve, something important, something she desperately MUST have or do. Or else: the stakes: what she stands to gain a lot if she succeeds, stands to lose if she fails.
You might want to include a ticking clock for this objective goal. (Like applying for grad school in another state, another country by a specific deadline.) This will force her to do what she needs to do before time runs out.
fwiw.
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