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A naive, anxiety-ridden film student uses documentary to interview strangers about their first time experiences in order to overcome her fear of all things unfamiliar.
The logline describes an an interesting situation -- but not a plot. Unfortunately, "overcome her fear of all things unfamiliar", is too general to qualify as a specific goal. The logline should state a specific objective goal she needs to achieve, something important, something she desperately MUSTRead more
The logline describes an an interesting situation — but not a plot. Unfortunately, “overcome her fear of all things unfamiliar”, is too general to qualify as a specific goal.
The logline should state a specific objective goal she needs to achieve, something important, something she desperately MUST have or do. Or else: the stakes: what she stands to gain a lot if she succeeds, stands to lose if she fails.
You might want to include a ticking clock for this objective goal. (Like applying for grad school in another state, another country by a specific deadline.) This will force her to do what she needs to do before time runs out.
fwiw.
See lessSophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
But on the other foot, if the aliens species can travel from another star system (at some kind of hyperspeed) and they already have the technology to siphon off the energy to their home planet (again, at hyperspeed, faster than the speed of light) then their technology must be literally and figuratiRead more
But on the other foot, if the aliens species can travel from another star system (at some kind of hyperspeed) and they already have the technology to siphon off the energy to their home planet (again, at hyperspeed, faster than the speed of light) then their technology must be literally and figuratively light years ahead of that of homo sapiens. Wouldn’t they already have figured out how to do what the engineer is struggling to do? Been there, done that eons ago? Why do they need her?
See lessSophie Lamport, a headstrong, brilliant engineer, accepts her dream job developing a new form of energy storage on an isolated wind farm in Northern Ontario. But on the night of a ferocious windstorm, Sophie encounters a sinister power which changes the course of her research and mental state, forever.
But on the other foot, if the aliens species can travel from another star system (at some kind of hyperspeed) and they already have the technology to siphon off the energy to their home planet (again, at hyperspeed, faster than the speed of light) then their technology must be literally and figuratiRead more
But on the other foot, if the aliens species can travel from another star system (at some kind of hyperspeed) and they already have the technology to siphon off the energy to their home planet (again, at hyperspeed, faster than the speed of light) then their technology must be literally and figuratively light years ahead of that of homo sapiens. Wouldn’t they already have figured out how to do what the engineer is struggling to do? Been there, done that eons ago? Why do they need her?
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