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When a naively sentimental clown doctor is approached by an 8 year old cancer patient in the hospital a bond is made and he must find a way to make the boy smile and learn to not get attached himself.
>>must accept his own son?s death What is your objective goal in posting another logline to this story? Is it to "accept" that fact that your earlier ideas weren't satisfactory? Or is your objective goal to write a logline that ignites enthusiasm, gives you the impetus and focus to write the script?Read more
>>must accept his own son?s death
What is your objective goal in posting another logline to this story? Is it to “accept” that fact that your earlier ideas weren’t satisfactory? Or is your objective goal to write a logline that ignites enthusiasm, gives you the impetus and focus to write the script?
Shouldn’t an objective goal always be forward looking to a desire future, not backward to a regretted past?
Of course, working through the grieving process of his dead son is a valid subjective need. But why is he guilt ridden? Grieving over the loss doesn’t necessarily entail guilt.
So he can’t make kids laugh. So he get’s fired. So what? What are the dramatic consequences that follow from that? What’s the worse thing that will happen to him, that he will do as a result? Why should we in the audience worry about his losing his job?
See lessAs a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.
The subject matter,GMO (genetically modified organisms) is topical, but as the others have noted, it's hard to get a sense of what the plot is about about. There needs to be a specific protagonist and antagonist. A mass of people may be oppressed and exploited, but it takes a leader to focus and harRead more
The subject matter,GMO (genetically modified organisms) is topical, but as the others have noted, it’s hard to get a sense of what the plot is about about.
There needs to be a specific protagonist and antagonist. A mass of people may be oppressed and exploited, but it takes a leader to focus and harness the popular discontent into a specific form of action. And there needs to be inciting incident, an event that lights the fuse, that sets off the powder keg of rebellion.
See lessAs a fascist state that controls the GMO tech that feeds the population seeks to secure its hold on power, the poorer farmers and climate refugees in the south embark on a secret mission to get back natural seeds from a heavily fortified island.
The subject matter,GMO (genetically modified organisms) is topical, but as the others have noted, it's hard to get a sense of what the plot is about about. There needs to be a specific protagonist and antagonist. A mass of people may be oppressed and exploited, but it takes a leader to focus and harRead more
The subject matter,GMO (genetically modified organisms) is topical, but as the others have noted, it’s hard to get a sense of what the plot is about about.
There needs to be a specific protagonist and antagonist. A mass of people may be oppressed and exploited, but it takes a leader to focus and harness the popular discontent into a specific form of action. And there needs to be inciting incident, an event that lights the fuse, that sets off the powder keg of rebellion.
See less