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The day before Christmas, an unadventurous, spoiled young boy gets kidnapped. He escapes with the help from a girl who has facts that will help him find his beloved father, but there is a price. He must first recover something that is precious to her before Christmas.
So the inciting incident is a note revealing that his father is still alive after the train accident? Unfortunately, the logline doesn't make clear that there is a cause and effect relationship between the train wreck and/or the note and the quest for a magic slipper.
So the inciting incident is a note revealing that his father is still alive after the train accident?
Unfortunately, the logline doesn’t make clear that there is a cause and effect relationship between the train wreck and/or the note and the quest for a magic slipper.
See lessThe day before Christmas, an unadventurous, spoiled young boy gets kidnapped. He escapes with the help from a girl who has facts that will help him find his beloved father, but there is a price. He must first recover something that is precious to her before Christmas.
So the inciting incident is a note revealing that his father is still alive after the train accident? Unfortunately, the logline doesn't make clear that there is a cause and effect relationship between the train wreck and/or the note and the quest for a magic slipper.
So the inciting incident is a note revealing that his father is still alive after the train accident?
Unfortunately, the logline doesn’t make clear that there is a cause and effect relationship between the train wreck and/or the note and the quest for a magic slipper.
See lessAfter falling through a wormhole, a powerful young superhero with supernatural power is thrown through a whirlwind when he finds himself in the "Real World" where he and his adventures have been nothing more than a series of books.
As the others have said. The logline has an inciting incident in the form of a force majeure that hurls the protagonist across the thresh hold into another world and transforms him into an ordinary person. What must he do when "he finds himself" as an ordinary person in the "real world"? What becomeRead more
As the others have said. The logline has an inciting incident in the form of a force majeure that hurls the protagonist across the thresh hold into another world and transforms him into an ordinary person.
What must he do when “he finds himself” as an ordinary person in the “real world”? What becomes his objective goal? Who opposes him — who is the antagonist? What’s at stake?
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