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Four Strangers meet in university, become best friends for two years, then one mistake finished everything.
So it's the story of the birth and death of some relationships? Who, among the four, stands out as the alpha-character, the protagonist who is the primary focus of the plot?
So it’s the story of the birth and death of some relationships? Who, among the four, stands out as the alpha-character, the protagonist who is the primary focus of the plot?
See lessWhen a hard-partying rockstar is kicked out of his band due to a drug addiction, he starts giving guitar lessons to fund his habit.
What will_zappy said. If his drug addiction made him an unstable, unreliable performer, how can he be a stable, reliable teacher? And as Richiev said, it's more of a situation than a plot. In a plot when an critical circumstance changes, the character is forced to change in some way; he may resist iRead more
What will_zappy said. If his drug addiction made him an unstable, unreliable performer, how can he be a stable, reliable teacher?
And as Richiev said, it’s more of a situation than a plot. In a plot when an critical circumstance changes, the character is forced to change in some way; he may resist it initially and ultimately he may fail, but either way the new circumstances won’t let him off the hook for the consequences of a flaw or personal issue.
But as this logline is written, there doesn’t seem to be a character arc. His situation changes — but he doesn’t. He goes from being a drug addict who supports his habit by performing to a drug addict who supports his habit by teaching.
I see some raw ore for a story here, but I think it needs refining and polishing.
See lessWhen a hard-partying rockstar is kicked out of his band due to a drug addiction, he starts giving guitar lessons to fund his habit.
What will_zappy said. If his drug addiction made him an unstable, unreliable performer, how can he be a stable, reliable teacher? And as Richiev said, it's more of a situation than a plot. In a plot when an critical circumstance changes, the character is forced to change in some way; he may resist iRead more
What will_zappy said. If his drug addiction made him an unstable, unreliable performer, how can he be a stable, reliable teacher?
And as Richiev said, it’s more of a situation than a plot. In a plot when an critical circumstance changes, the character is forced to change in some way; he may resist it initially and ultimately he may fail, but either way the new circumstances won’t let him off the hook for the consequences of a flaw or personal issue.
But as this logline is written, there doesn’t seem to be a character arc. His situation changes — but he doesn’t. He goes from being a drug addict who supports his habit by performing to a drug addict who supports his habit by teaching.
I see some raw ore for a story here, but I think it needs refining and polishing.
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